Reviews for a lea iacta est

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tenshiamanda 2004-02-28 ch 7,	abuseHm...Atlantis? A place between life and the afterlife. This fic is awesome, I so want to find out what the town is.
Atari 2003-08-25 ch 7,	abuseI Atari puffs up proudly am too dumb to guess... I dunno... :( Is it a real place? Like Fanelia? Or is it a metaphor we're talking here? Your writing style is so surreal, it makes my head spin (in a good way, of course). ^_^ Let's see, Sophie means "wisdom". Does that have anything to do with anything? Is Sophie supposed to be Sora from the Esca movie? Is she supposed to be someone we know? Am I getting colder here? Last thing I liked, was how you put together the Celena-Dilandau thing. That just works so well. O.O Awesome idea. Only problem I saw was that you switched tenses from present to past a couple times. Don't do that! I like the present tense thing you got going! ^_^ Anyway, update soon! ~Atari
Atari 2003-08-20 ch 6,	abuseI think I got an email from you telling me this chapter was up. It took me a while to figure it out which story it was though. Sorry. ^_^; Anyway . . . I like the return to the cafe chick's POV. Also, the present tense makes it more engaging. It's a rarely used tense for story-writing, so it really makes this stand out. I don't know about couples, except for the obvious: Van x Hitomi. But maybe a little temptation either way? This cafe chick has peaked my interest. Is this someone we know? I'm glad you got over your writer's block. ^_^ Anyway, I'm looking forward to the the next chapter. ~Atari
pogo the kosher penguin 2003-06-16 ch 6,	abusethat chapter was kinda like a trip to the twlight zone. :)POGO
Atari 2003-05-13 ch 5,	abuseHmm... this is really... interesting. I don't think I can give you any suggestions, since the whole thing is really mysterious. I don't really know what's going on so I can't tell you where to go. :) But you've achieved a really nice effect with your use of language. At first I was finding the really short paragraphs annoying but they actually work well to create a dark, mysterious mood and a whole lot of suspense. I like the perspective you used in the first chapter, though I'm not sure why you didn't carry it through to the rest. It would have made the story much more interesting - and certainly original. Most people tend to think that if they write in first-person perspective the narrator has to be the main character. Very not true. And the last scene with Dilandau was really well done! Anyway, hope you get over your writer's block and write some more!
pogo the kosher penguin 2003-05-08 ch 5,	abusehaha, guess what is still don't know what's going on, but i still really really wanna know so please continue
Amanda Morgan 2003-05-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseAt last! I've almost given up any hope. Do continue!
pogo the kosher penguin 2003-03-07 ch 4,	abusea lea iacta est, ceasar said something similar to the same affect when he crossed to ruibican(sp?) and started to march on rome didn't he? wow, im really sad for myself that i know that. anyway, i not really sure what's going on, but that makes me more intriqued, please update soon, this sounds really cool! :)POGO
Etowato 2003-03-07 ch 4,	abuseI find this story VERY interesting! Although I don't know what is going on since you haven't explained anything. So far I can tell Dil(a street kid?) and his DSlayers are a gang and Zaibach another gang. Don't know why Folken and Van moved there. And what's wrong with Hitomi? Please continue this story! I would really like to read more. Everyone in here seems so odd it's so weird. I'm dying with curiousity!
quicksilverblackroses 2003-02-24 ch 3,	abuseoh, but i like this one! glomps van it's different from your usual stuff..i thinks. but but..i likes. is good. though, Miguel jumping into the quiet beginning was a bit confusing. and um, it looks funny when the word 'looking' lines up three times. giggles decides not to mention spelling :p .more please? explanations and backgrounds would be nice.
Arsinoe 2003-02-21 ch 3, anon.	abuseStellar! I love it! You have this very edgy writing style, I'm so jealous. I've always admired people who can write like this. I especially loved your first chapter. It had a really deep quality to it. Please, continue. ArsinoetheXVII
irratic pedestrian 2003-02-19 ch 3, anon.	abusedon't drop, don't drop! it's really good, and i'm really looking forward to reading more interaction between this dilandau and all the other characters. so keep going strong!
Cloud Albatou 2003-02-18 ch 3,	abuseThis is really good^_^. Intreging I suppose would be the word^_^I hope you add mor to this.n' will this be a D/H by any chance? hopeful lookAdd more soon onegai!^_~
Shrike 2003-02-18 ch 3,	abusenice again! Cigarette smoke and Dilandau's red eyes glaring from somewhere in that haze - great picture :). Keep it up, very interesting so far
Falling Faster 2003-02-12 ch 2, anon.	abuseInteresting..... I'd like to see where you take this one. Update soon, ok? Take care

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