sad, dramatic and nice.

great story.

Very intresting read for sure. The whole idea of Sasami go mad with the power of Tsunami is defently a good twist on a story. This is some thing I could see happening to even that best of us, and with the whole formate of the story being a nightmare makes it a lot more belevable. Good job Paladin13

...That was creepy... I mean, really creepy. I didn't get the whole Washu thing because I don't know her history, but overall the story was very well written. Just... creepy...

Very well done. I loved it. Very dark. Your vision of Tsunami is a bit different than what I would expect but it is very possible. Either way it was an enjoyable read.

Now this is powerfull stuff. Another early one I read and couldn't get out of my mind (in fact it was my introduction to Mayuka). This is actually a great counterpoint fic to 'Where the Sky Meets the Sea' and I can see you have thought about the Sasami/Tsunami situation quite a bit.

I'll admit I was rather shocked at the harshness of the main body of the fic, but it came together so well at the end. I only hope people who read this stick with it to the end because it all makes sense then, and it really is superb.

Ah, another one of my favorites. While I totally disagree with the concept of "If Sasami 'got' Tenchi, she would be nothing but a mean bitch", I *do* like this portrayel of the thought. This was one dark dream, alright, and you captured the fleeting hopelessness that everyone was thrust into. The whole thing sends shivers up and down the readers spines, and your elogent writing style certainly assited you in this demeanor.

Thanks for writing such a bleak and depressing story. It's a very cerebral adventure, that's for sure.

I dont review ofin but this is done vary well. Im dont read 1 chs ofine but this is the best sort stoy i have read in some time. congrads!

phillip

aka Dark

This is an evil story for many reasons - they all cannot be expressed tangibly, but nonetheless the reasons exist.

I'm still astounded you pulled off portraying Tsunami in a less than favorable light while keeping true to the characters, worries, concerns and *possibilities.* It's an intriguing thought, perfection gone wrong.

For technical notes, everything seems very solid. I dislike the word wrap with a passion. It seems very constraining but every author has a particular style or format they like and I'll respect that.

You are a very creative and original author, Ms. Eagle, I hope that we will see some fresh work from you soon.

You are very gifted in both talent and imagination.

Use that for our benefit, amusement, and education. Please. :)