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| luver of jellybeans 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAw! Utter R/Hr fluff! ^^ And I love the part at the end where the twins get the letter... Hehe. |
| Realilly 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseYay! RHr! The plot is very nice, and it's very well written. Just 1 thing: Ron uses the word "Dearest." That strikes me as a bit too...exaggerated? His language is very nice and proper, while Hermione calls him a git. Is it just me, or would that be switched around a little? Good job! |
| RonlovesHermione234 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! so cute! keep writing! ^-^ I want to know what happends next! |
| aruora.grissom 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abusebrilliant to bad there is not more chapters to it |
| LunarSquirrel 2005-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read 'Harry and the Promise Ring' or in fact any other HP fanfics. The sheer mass of them seems a little daunting, though I do read all of the books as they come out. Anyway, I loved your Artemis Fowl story and just had to check out some of your others, and I think you had converted me. I shall take a bigger intrest in Harry potter fanfiction from now on. Thank you and well done! |
| x se 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseCute and fluffy and what not. I enjoyed reading it very much, you are a great author. I liked the switching back and forth thing, I did something imilar in "Perfct Boyfriend, Mystery Girlfriend". Ah well, that's about it. Very nice, as I said. ^_^ |
| GinnyDragon54 2005-03-05 ch 1, | abuse"Also, I believe it is quite accurate that a romance developing out of friendship should go through love before physical intimacy, at least that’s the way my relationship developed with my boyfriend of four years, best friend of five. A friendship like Ron and Hermione’s merely takes one person with enough courage (and enough prompting from friends!) to take the first step to flourish into a serious romance. In my real life relationship, it was me. In this story, it was Ron. So for those who choke on the fluff, bugger off, because in real life, fluff happens. : )" LOL! I completely agree. I have been friends with my boyfriend for 3 years, and we've been dating or a year and a half, so I know what you mean. We took the physical aspect of the relationship really slow. Anyway, excelent story. I loved it! Love From, Stephie-Chan |
| AngelicFairy 2004-06-09 ch 1, | abuseCute cute cute! And I even liked the little bit about Pig wanting to be responsible post owl. Hehe. *Maura* |
| SnakeEyesHannah 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseNow come on. You can't just leave us all hanging here! Where's the rest of the chapters? I want more fluff! It's actually been a while since I read a good fluffie, but this one... Oh this one just blows me away! It's among my top 5 fluffies! I just love Ron's letter. Sure it might be slightly out of character, but come on, Ron can be romantic too. When he want to... It would be fun to know the rest of the plot. This fluffie has GREAT potential. What will Fred and George do? Will Hermione come to the Burrow and will they make up? Or maybe make OUT? |
| SlytherinRomantic 2003-12-27 ch 1, | abusehehehe ths=is like telling everone what had happened in your story The Promise Ring its really cool...I still wish for a sequel to that story but...oh well nice way of putting all that in that chapter!! |
| Jaquelyne 2003-11-02 ch 1, | abuseIt only takes a moment for a love of a friend to become that of a love for a lover. My husband and I were best friends for a year before we fell in love. Beautifully written short. I believe in Ron and Hermione just as much as do about Harry and Ginny. Bravo! |
| Plaidly Lush 2003-08-27 ch 1, | abuseBloody Brilliant! I love it. I can't wait to read the rest of Promise Ring. |
| freakyfairy 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abuseWow! so sweet... |
| Aahz 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abuseHow do you say… aw… That is so… *gags* I hate this word, but that’s what it is. I don’t mind reading things that are, but seeing it in real life, or admitting it in a review? Saying it’s cute is the last thing I want to do. Anywho, brilliant, as I’m seeing all your works are, even if I have to admit they’re cute. |
| zealousgirl 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abuseHaving been totally enthralled with your other fanfic, I decided that I had to read this one, especially since you did mention that it was a companion piece. I have to say that it is just as wonderfully written as HP and The Promise Ring. Your A/N regarding Ron's letter was not necessary, since you did say that he spent a lot of time writing it in the first place - so it makes sence that it would be fluent and expressive. I particularly liked how you used Pig in this story - especially when he realized that he must be doing something right that would make Ron and Hermione so happy (I could picture him twittering around joyously!) Thank you for this. |