Wow, that was so good! I loved it! You have amazing originality, and everything is so well-written! I'm glad the ending was happy and Link and Zelda married! It was interesting, having read Rebel Assassin first and then this one. I didn't even realize this was yours until a few chapters into it and I looked up at the author.

Really, your fanfics are the best Zelda I've ever read. Probably even the best fanfics I've ever read. You should take up a career in writing, because you are exceptionally talented.

By the way, it's nice to see a male author have a fleshed out romantic plot and strong, warrior, can-take-care-of-themselves female characters. You don't see that all that often for guy writers and I respect you for that. The whole damsel-in-distress thing is so out. lol

Awesome fanfic, thanks for sharing! Love it!

Yay! Finally finished :)
I loved it!! Especially the Zelink moments ..
Wow.. I was impressed by all the details from the games that you put (alttp, and of course MM).

That was... just... gah. I loved it. It was lovely.

Thanks for posting this. It was... fulfilling? And decidedly enjoyable.

Just had to say that your fanfic was really awesome, I've only ever found a few which held me enthralled all the way through and yours was one, your a talented writer. keep up the excellent work!

oh wow, real cool story.

WOW! A truly compelling tale. I applaud your creativity and your excellent writing. I must say that you are an exceptional writer. The plot was well developed and the character depth,it was chilling how well I got to know the characters as I read on. I've read many fanfics and they more often than not, lack a storyline deep enough to keep my intrest for more than the first chapter. However your story sucked me in, I started reading at 10pm out of sheer border and I didn't stop until i read all 39 chapters! it's now 1:17 am! I really enjoyed reading "The Legend of Zelda: Rebel Assassin" 3 hours of my life I'll never get back, but it was worth it for a good read. I look forward to reading more of your work, and keep up the great work.

Finally, I finished this story! After how many years of attempting to read it?! Anyway, love the ending! Very nice twist. I like how it ties in with Rebel Assassin at the end. It was very well written, and I WOULD recommend it getting published, if it weren't for those pesky copywright laws. Oh well, life goes on, and that's what this website is for, isn't it? Yep, you're a very talented writer, just like Arxane, except you wrote more fanfics than he has, and none of them come anywhere close to as long as his is. But I digress. I think you should try writing and publishing some more unique stories for the whole world to read.

Koloz

P.S: I also loved Rebel Assassin.

Again I'm a little late on reading this But I still wanted to drop by and say this is one hell of a fic! I am so looking forward to whatever you crank out next!

i must say, i have absolutely no recollection of reading anything with malon/shadow onwards. x_X interesting, to say the least. all in all, pretty good. i like rebel assassin more though. :D

"“When you battle,” he said"
- "you're" instead of your :P

" She briefly I wondered why his guards could afford a boat when he couldn't, but decided to let the matter drop."
-typo?

"“You enemy and my enemy is one,” "
-your enemy?

hm... does the prince have a slight fancy towards zelda? after all, she does have a heroic deed. i wonder was the females of the freelancers look like.

and yes! im looking forward towards a stronger zelda. link and zelda have been acting rather pansy-ish, a bit unlike them, esp for link. well then again, i did make my link run around doing meaningless errands and uprooting plants before responding to urgent pleas of something or another. heh heh.

"He would get the Key back and when he did he would break her arms and legs so she could not escape again."
- why didnt he do that in the first place? easier to handle. should cut out her vocal chords too, while he's at it, so his bloody anger wouldnt get the best of him.

and link is such a dork. if infidelity was such a horrific thing to them, held sacred to them all, link should be questioning zelda's morales instead of wallowing about how zelda may like the prince more than himself. link should know better.

then again, zelda should have known better than to believe cyle over link. oh well. xP

" Cyle glanced at Vance. His Advisor was blowing his now twice broken nose on a style of handkerchief he knew was popular with noblewomen around Hyrule." - LOL. will there be an explanation for that? hahaha

malon? dang it. =[

decided not to kill vance because it would have been a cowardly way to kill someone? wow that's just a tad bit stupid of her. may be a plot hole, may be not.

and another thing with vance. you'd think that a powerful sorceror who'd have a lot of time honing his magical skills would have patience or would have at least noticed the wavering bars. and those insults were very childish. i find it hard to believe that a wizard of his calibur would be that succeptable to verbal attacks. and to have only one shield between him and her is rather stupid, considering she is way more physically capable than him. unless the point is being made that he has way too much ego and confidence. eh, oh well.

=[ this is so frustrating