enjoying this story..very unique..i feel soriest for sev all he has had to endure. now he has to have his child named after someone who tormented him in school i just think that is very inconiderate of all of them!

i love your story, very very well writen and amazing! i love your writing style, the best!

adorable!

This was a bit hasty. Good thing that it's completed though :)

But back to this chapter, i couldn't help but wonder about two things that took most of my attention.

First was how could Harry father a child knowing what the child would be put through? Harry disliked his fame, hated his own prophecy, so why is he acting so mellow that his own child would be a sacrifial lamb? It has always seemed that family is everything for Harry. It was the hardest thing to swallow here that he would be willing to put his own future child through this no matter the costs.

It might've helped to know more about the merlin's curse and what it would mean for the child.

Second thing was why did Albus immeadiately put Snape as a sub and the mother. Why not Harry as the younger party? Albus didn't know about Severus' girl bits then nor that he had slept with voldemort and couldn't get it up at all. so why not Harry to carry the baby?

Interesting fic. I would have liked it more if there were a bit more drama and intense moments in their relationship and the killing of voldemort. But, I thought that the last sentence was cleverly ended and it was totally sweet in a snape kind of way. :)

This was a great story! Absolutly loved it!

That was amazing. Please tell me that there will be a sequel.

wow. that was... different. i expected it to end in overabundance of fluff (since it was mpreg, and somehow i thought that mpreg should either be smutty or fluffy). but that, u got them into a better state of relationship without me realising it. perhaps some more detail and time could do good, but i thin that was good enough. and of course, severus delivering in awful-dirty-god-knows-where place in front of so many people.. wow...

and Sirius getting all amaed like that.. *giggles* liked that.

Interesting!

loved this story! At the end where you suggesting albus (baby not adult) was dyslexic? It just seemed like you where with the whole more alert thing. Ace story, well done!

Great Story.

love it!

Lmao so the protector was Albus? The child that they didnt have to have - or let me rephrase that the child that the would probably not have had. lol

I like it. It is a nice story.

must write more chapters. i loved the story i hope you write more for it.