Reviews for Senshi & Gundams

Reviews For: Senshi & Gundams - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

AyameKitsune 2008-02-10 ch 11,	abuseCracks up I love this story! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
Artimis the moon maiden 2005-12-19 ch 11,	abuseyou need to finish the story!
Ella 2005-09-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseI mean really, how many OC's was that? Having one OC is bad enough as they atract the attention away from the real characters. But then to not only have them, but to start a story with an OC! NO, that is WRONG!wrong I tell you WRONG! I have to say, I think that you acted as though the characters were like real people from the Manga/Anime. If you must have OCs, the best thing you can do is to introduce them slowy into the story and maybe have them as background characters only. What you really need to do is not make the characters in your story speek Japanese, it sends out the message that you want to prove to people you can spek another language(even if it is restricted to about ten words). And above that, if you really insist on making your characters speak Japanese, don't put the meaning next to it. If you want to be a good author you have to asume that your readers will be able do understand what you mean, without an explanation. Well now that I have finished with my rant, good day.
Starcatcher 2003-12-05 ch 11, anon.	abuseHeh, interesting. I really like how this is going, and even though you have your own team of Senshi, they're not ultra perfect and unbeatable. This is incredibly realistic, just like a fic should be. Though it wouldn't hurt to bash the Tux-boy a bit more. Glad you liked Operation: BASH VIDEL. Please finish your other stories.
Tenshi no Yupiteru 2003-05-14 ch 11,	abuseuh-oh! * smoke comes from brain * * puts hand behind, laughing sheepishly * i read ur story, and i luv it! luv lotz jupangel0:)
Sakura-chan 2002-12-15 ch 10,	abusechrist, i want to kno wut happens!!!!!!!!!!! get the next chapter out!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sakura-chan 2002-12-15 ch 9,	abusehmmm...i think i like it better when kafir was with usagi...but this is interesting. oh, and the dark lord of the sith? hav u been watching star wars recently? and btw, this is a absolutely wonderful fic, even though i hav no idea what happens in gundam and i don't kno who's who.
Mercury Ice Storm 2002-08-23 ch 10, anon.	abuseYES! U updated! I luv you fic and'm happy you decided to continue it. It's really interesting. Thanks and please get the next chapter out soon.
Silverdrake 2002-06-07 ch 9,	abuseYah! Can't wait for the next chapter. You are a great writer of crossovers and are able to insert OC's very well. I have enjoyed your other stories and can't wait for them to be updated. And Now I think that I may have you Shi is in you SMxMK fic. Very clever. Keep Writting! ^-^;(Yea I now I say that in all of them)
Mercury Ice Storm 2002-06-04 ch 9,	abuseThat was so good, I love the pairings. Please get the next chapter out soon or I'm going to freak. Until the next chapter, Ja!
till-iburnout 2002-05-12 ch 9,	abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aznli90 2002-05-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou did great on your writing wait for the next chapter
Sliver of Melody 2002-05-11 ch 9,	abusehehehe COOL! hehe! I am not going to stop doing that now so :-P MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! okay okay I'm done now
Raye Maxwell 2002-04-10 ch 8,	abuseOMG THAT WAS SSOOOOO GOOD!!! Keep it up! And I wanna see what happens. And please put more Duo and Rei in it. THANX!!!
Sliver of Melody 2002-01-07 ch 8,	abuseEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

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