 Foxluna 2009-09-19 . chapter 11trowa and shawn get a grip u 2 please for the love of the goddess! u 2 were engaged for crying out loud and are able body fighters so get along! and hello trying to remember what happened between u 2 would be helpful right about now u 2 idiots!
Trowa: HEY SHAWN STARTED IT!
Shawn: DID NOT U PIG. U JUST WONT FIGHT ME COWARD JUST CUZ IM A
WOMAN! -Mumbles under her breath "stupid prick"-
anyways hope u update soon!
please and thank u! |
 Foxluna 2009-09-19 . chapter 5damn i am really loving this story aalot! cant wait to read alot more! please make sure to keep updating this story please!
please?, and thank u!! |
 Hocapontas 2009-01-20 . chapter 11This story is really good. Please update soon. |
 keemew2 2009-01-09 . chapter 1Uh...wow.
Well, I know this will be weird, someone reviewing after so long, but I am 'researching' the way people write the characters and do crossovers. I am trying to bring one of my crossovers back to life after five years and didn't intend to review on old, discontinued stories.
Anyway. I just wanted to comment on something. Two things, actually. Just because you dislike someone, it does not give you the right to bastardize their personalities. If you want to take them out of the picture, that is understandable, but please do it in a believable manner.
The second thing is, it's fine to introduce OC's, but do so in more fluid manner. Who are they, what is their relation, where they alive backing the Silver Millennium?
I hope you do find my review to be tedious and annoying, I understand if you are irritated that I reviewed such an old stories with constructive criticism as apposed to interest. But believe me, I find the idea for you story quite appealing. I just found the execution not to my liking.
Sorry. |
 AyameKitsune 2008-02-10 . chapter 11*Cracks up* I love this story! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ |
 Artimis the moon maiden 2005-12-19 . chapter 11you need to finish the story! |
 Ella 2005-09-20 . chapter 1 I mean really, how many OC's was that? Having one OC is bad enough as they atract the attention away from the real characters. But then to not only have them, but to start a story with an OC! NO, that is WRONG!wrong I tell you WRONG!
I have to say, I think that you acted as though the characters were like real people from the Manga/Anime. If you must have OCs, the best thing you can do is to introduce them slowy into the story and maybe have them as background characters only.
What you really need to do is not make the characters in your story speek Japanese, it sends out the message that you want to prove to people you can spek another language(even if it is restricted to about ten words).
And above that, if you really insist on making your characters speak Japanese, don't put the meaning next to it. If you want to be a good author you have to asume that your readers will be able do understand what you mean, without an explanation.
Well now that I have finished with my rant, good day. |
 Starcatcher 2003-12-05 . chapter 11 Heh, interesting. I really like how this is going, and even though you have your own team of Senshi, they're not ultra perfect and unbeatable. This is incredibly realistic, just like a fic should be. Though it wouldn't hurt to bash the Tux-boy a bit more. Glad you liked Operation: BASH VIDEL. Please finish your other stories. |
 Tenshi no Yupiteru 2003-05-14 . chapter 11uh-oh!
* smoke comes from brain *
* puts hand behind, laughing sheepishly *
i read ur story, and i luv it!
luv lotz
jupangel0:) |
 Sakura-chan 2002-12-15 . chapter 10christ, i want to kno wut happens!!!!!!!!!!! get the next chapter out!!!!!!!!!!!! |
 Sakura-chan 2002-12-15 . chapter 9hmmm...i think i like it better when kafir was with usagi...but this is interesting. oh, and the dark lord of the sith? hav u been watching star wars recently? and btw, this is a absolutely wonderful fic, even though i hav no idea what happens in gundam and i don't kno who's who. |
 Mercury Ice Storm 2002-08-23 . chapter 10 YES! U updated! I luv you fic and'm happy you decided to continue it. It's really interesting. Thanks and please get the next chapter out soon. |
 Silverdrake 2002-06-07 . chapter 9Yah! Can't wait for the next chapter. You are a great writer of crossovers and are able to insert OC's very well. I have enjoyed your other stories and can't wait for them to be updated. And Now I think that I may have you Shi is in you SMxMK fic. Very clever. Keep Writting! ^-^;(Yea I now I say that in all of them) |
 Mercury Ice Storm 2002-06-04 . chapter 9That was so good, I love the pairings. Please get the next chapter out soon or I'm going to freak. Until the next chapter, Ja! |
 till-iburnout 2002-05-12 . chapter 9PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |