Really good writing, I loved the thing. I found it a bit mysterious and hard to follow at times, but that really reflects the character himself, mysterious and strange. I'm thinking the woman is the one from the opening movie, Mullenkamp, but I could be wrong.

I really can't beleive that i'm only the second person to review this, it's seriously good stuff.

firstly, I'm angry. not accepting anonymous reviews, what are you thinking?
But on a more fic-related note, I have read it, and I like what read.
A little confusing, but good.
This is a little... too benign for Sydney, but not out of character. Sydney is one of the most powerful and mysterious characters in the game. Any sort of character study on him is BOUND to be difficult; a first-person story is even harder.
I really enjoyed it, and I am quite surprised at how good it was and how no one reviewed it.