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CrossworldNoMiko
2004-03-09 . chapter 14
Hey! I've been following your story for a long time now. Open-ended... I can deal with that. Very nicely done. Keep on writing FY fics.
Ja! ^_~ N-chan
Nuriko no Mikos
2004-02-26 . chapter 14
Your ever-faithful reviewer, reporting for duty! ^_~. I like it... although it's very different from the rest of the fic. The question is, though, what happened to Shun and Kai? Going to read Mother now. But I'll give you a proper review first.
It sort of summed up the underlying conflict running through the whole thing -- whether Tomo (Chuin, sorry) could truly have a relationship with Jake and be a different person, remembering (and not telling Jake) what he did. It amazes me, how you managed to sew the story together like you did. How it was all resolved (well, not resolved, but at least done with). M. I'm impressed.
Going off to read Mother. And do homework.
Meghan
2004-02-23 . chapter 13
Poke poke. Hurry up with the family background!
wolftsai
2004-02-13 . chapter 13
(starts chanting) more more more more more more more more more more more more more etc etc. REAlly good. i dont really like the aunt. at all. but WRITE MORE!
Nuriko no Mikos
2004-02-13 . chapter 13
God, I love this story. I do. It's so good. I was so happy when I got the little Author Alert e-mail... ^_^. It's good... but it's also incredibly sad. I love Shun... *sniffles* It's weird though - in the first reincarnation story I ever wrote, they were also Shun and Kai.
Okay, I know from experience that when you've been writing a story for this long and the chapters are coming along this slowly, you will most likely be relieved to not have to write it anymore. So, along with this incentive, I will now pressure you. ^_^. WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE! We're al waiting! All 43 of your reviews want more! It's just an epilogue chapter, just a nice, short little epilogue... That can take very long! Write!
CrossworldNoMiko
2004-02-12 . chapter 12
WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!?!? I know whats going on, but your story is so damn unpredictable! ^O^ It makes me want to read more! But there is no more.. ;_; Please update soon.
Nuriko no Mikos
2004-01-20 . chapter 12
Ah! I practically screamed when I saw you'd updated. Since it was too late at night, I simply typed "AH!" numerous times. Good good good! Poor Shun. Poor poor Shun. *cuddles Shun* Well, I don't have much to say about it, because it seemed like a "filler" chapter - except that I'm ever-so-happy you updated. Go you!
The plot is thickening! Don't let Shun leave! Ah! A lot of it was a little confusing... but, once again, I feel that this is a filler chapter, so I'm guessing more will be explained later.
I don't like Shun's aunt. Haven't seen much of her yet, though... I'm just getting a bad vibe. *glares at her*
Try to be inspired to write more!
Nuriko no Mikos
2003-12-26 . chapter 11
What's with this?!! How can you possibly have a new fanfic up and not have this one finished yet?! I love this fanfic! Please write! *sniffles* See, you know this is good, because normally putting Tama and Suboshi together would've turned me off of a fanfic for all of eternity (Suboshi deserves better than that scum!), and yet, I've stuck to reading this and checking every few weeks for new chapters. So, when's the next one coming up? Please, dodger-chan! You know you want to get it over with!
CrossworldNoMiko
2003-11-28 . chapter 11
Whoa! Those last two chapters were great! More Suboshi please! ^_^
thekatgrl
2003-10-03 . chapter 11
wow this is a really amazing story. i feel so bad for shun, albeit he is a little... confused. update soon!
fruits candy
2003-10-01 . chapter 10
you hafta write more, i really liked this! Ha, he kissed taka! I knew that would happen... to bad Suboshi’s brother hates him so much, its deppressing...
Suboshi is one of my fav, char, Im so happy he has a fanfic! Write more, its rox!
otaku-no-miko
2003-09-23 . chapter 10
This is GOOD!
A Tama/Suboshi pairing...*shudder*I like the story and I like slash just as much as the next chick, but...you disrespect his name! Pairing him with that...that...THING...
Other than that, awesome story, you are really an awesome writer, and I look forward to the rest.
~otaku~
Chaotic Demon
2003-09-12 . chapter 9
that was good
Meghan
2003-09-12 . chapter 9
Hiya! Another great chapter! Thanks, er, dodger-chan (I feel weird addressing you in the second person as well as not by your real name, but whatever..). Whatever possessed Taka to pick up THAT book in order to keep his mind off of possible fraticide? I agree, it does make one think of FY, though...I don't like Taka's behavior with respect to Jake, though. He should either tell Jake the truth or make Tomo tell--give Tomo an ultimatum or something. A person IS their memories, so if someone has past life memories, they are also that person from their past life...but we all know that Tamahome isn't perfect =). Keep writing more! I love it!
Chibi-Kaz
2003-09-12 . chapter 9
This is a very interesting fic, but i do have one question: what DID happen to Genrou? I mean, is he in rehab or what?!?
Sorry - I'm a Tasuki-only fangirl!
Cheers,
Chibi_kaz
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