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Jirel
2009-08-29 . chapter 2
Thank God the constant parade of people who can create intriging stories lines and then abandon them leaving the ones reading them in a lurch has taught me to check the final chapters of all good stories. It seems that the odds are about 80% that if the story's good the author didn't do the real work of sketching out the story line ahead of time and therefore backs themself into a corner and abandons the story unable to finish it.
shadowninja-yuna
2009-05-28 . chapter 13
Omg... De D: I'm hoping to read the end of this soon. I want to know what happened.
jazzith
2008-10-25 . chapter 13
this is so good. Must be one of he best fanfics I've evr read. Can't wait 'till the the next chapter, it's so suspenseful.
Kaede Yuki
2008-05-13 . chapter 13
Ne, Under the Oak Tree-san,

You said you're not the type to abandon a fic halfway... So, please... pwetty please update, ne?

I've began reading the fic in 2005, and I really want to see an ending to this fic, ne...

Anyway, ganbatte, ne!

- Kaede Yuki @ Yukiya ~
LinaStar
2008-01-09 . chapter 13
Are you planning on finishing this fic? Because you did say that you are not an author to leave a story unfinished. This is an amazing fic and I'm seriously disappointed that it is lacking an ending! Please give it an ending? Please?

PS You're from the UK aren't you? You spell things differently than us American folks lol. I didn't really notice it though until you wrote that Carol and Bikky put Dee's bag in the boot of the car. It made me grin. :D
natsumeluvr
2007-12-19 . chapter 13
lol...just noting u said u were gonna finish...if it isnt too much...could u? im like totally in luv iwht the story rite now...lol...yea
Deviliscious
2006-12-22 . chapter 13
I love this story! I always like a good Dee torture and angst! So what happened? Where's the rest of it?

And yeah. I don't mind character death so long as its the evil bad guys...oh wait, you weren't meaning that did you? If it's death to Dee or Ryo, I'll kill you! But torturing Dee? Go right ahead! ^_^

Anyways, I need to know what happens next! I'm dying here! Please update and keep up the good work!
kitkat78
2006-12-07 . chapter 13
Please finish this story! Oh please! You've led us all this far, and to leave it hanging...it's too much! Arggh!

This has to be one of my favorite FAKE fanfics on ffnet. I love it! Love it, love it, love it! Can't say I love it enough, heh.

Oh and please no death fic. Haven't poor Dee and Ryo been through enough already? Lol. Not that it has to be a happy, cheesy schmeesy "And then Ryo hugged him and Dee knew he was forgiven blah blah blah" but death just doesn't seem fair, y'know?

Anyway, I know the last update was in 2003, but I thought, hey, maybe with Christmas coming up, it'd be a good holiday gift for all us FAKE fans to see a new chapter of this story :)
ShadowCat17
2006-09-01 . chapter 1
Aren't Dee's eyes green? I am sure that Ryo mentioned the color of his eyes in vol. 7 during the love scene, and in the OVA Dee's eyes are green. I just thought I could let you know because this is my thrid read, and yes I know that you have it on Hitus (sp?) but the plot line and the writing is just so cool!! That I can't help but re-read!
e.beth
2006-08-22 . chapter 13
NO dethfic! there is enough angst in the story
please
TheRomanGeneral
2006-06-21 . chapter 13
A very intersting story. I quite enjoyed it. I do hope that you find the time to one day finish the rewrite you are planning.
You've done well to keep the characters believable and their character intact.
Shadow Cat17
2006-05-11 . chapter 13
Please update soon! This is such an awesome story and you leave us hanging like that! Please finish this story!
Ians_Koibito aka Ji-chan
2006-05-11 . chapter 13
*pines away at lost Situation: D* T_T

Oh my it has taken me forever to find this fik again. *snugglz it* The only FAKE fik that I really actually like. O__O And it's still not updated. *sobs*

Eww~~ The news of a re-write is really intriging though. Me hopes that Dee shall errm... lets just say I wouldn't be against a deathfik, with obviously Dee. XD Oh poor Dee, this is the price you pay for being my favourite. *pets chibi Dee plushie* Although...*Ponders*...Dee/Bicky/NiceDoctor death fikkie would just be so completely angsty. =3 Can we say, Dark Angst **? =X

Neeways please keep up with your writings and don't forget this one ne?

Sprig
2006-02-04 . chapter 13
omg! -bangs head against desk in anticipation-
hikarinotori
2006-01-01 . chapter 13
This story is amazing! Well written and completely absorbing. I'm relatively new to and am making my way through all of the FAKE stories and this is the one of the most enthralling ones I've found yet. Please update and finish this story. Endings are hard when we want a story to continue and especially when the writing is as good as yours, but it's horrible to see Dee like this and you just left him in that condition!! How could you?!
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