As a fan of the myth books I can say that you ha ve made a good representation of Ahaz, and also managed to keep it humourous good job!

ROTFL! Very well done.

*giggles* Lovely! ;) You captured AAhz, congrats. Very good story - found this through your bio.

Again, nice job. :D

This was really good! It sounded like it came from the books. I am suprised, however, that you didn't tell me you were writing fanfic. Why the secrecy? This is a great story

Good, It needs some work, but it's good.

Well, here's a little story... I was given a book called Myth Adventures last year by my science teacher. Cool huh? Well, here's the problem. The book contains 4 books, Another Fine Myth, Myth Conceptions, Myth Directions, and Hit or Myth. Got it? Now I was wondering if you could tell me if the series is continued after that. Because well, I love the series. I mean, look at my screen name. LOL. Yeah. Very interesting… so could you drop me an e-mail? It’s under my profile, okay? Thanks….

Very cute, and well-written too. I wish it were a bit longer, though, because from this little snippet you seem like a good author. I'd like to read a little further before the beginning of the story, or maybe a side story, if you ever feel inclined to try. _ great snapshot of Aahz's perspective, though! I really enjoyed it.