like dude come on, can you figer something out, i would love to reed more to this story

it so a dont know how to explein it but it made me want to cry

im a big fan of gabriolis,cant wait to reed the rest

Interesting. Is there any more?

aw! How sweet! He found his true happiness! Such a great story!

Where's the rest of the story? I wanna see more!

Who would have thought that Spectra had a dark streek in her! Please update soon! -

YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK! for up dateing this story YOU ROCK! yes yes yes yes yes yes yes good fic

Yay! Update! Yay!
One suggestion, though: You might want to consider page breaks or some type of division to prevent confusion in such places as
' "It was, dad. It really was." Rachna's reply was a little sad.
She was running late for her first day of the new term. '
Give us something to indicate a scene change.

Me, again. I would really like to see this storyline continued. Here's a thought: if Gabriolis is to be professor of Mon World studies, he most likely would have some familiarity with the story of the black-winged angel who played such an important role in saving Mon World from Oroboros. This might be a way in which he could come to terms with his past without being aware that he himself is the angel. I'm halfway tempted to write the fic myself, but I've only seen about eight episodes so far, four of which are in Japanese only (no subtitles; thank you, little sister, for lending me your Japanese-english dictionary!)

Wow! you are a great writer! you should do more to the story! tell more about our favourite darkwingedangle!

IT LOOKS PRETTY GOOD BUT ROCHNA IS WRONG ITS ROCKNA.
TURST ME ON THIS ONE.

Don't you dare end it here!

Seriously, this story begs for continuation. Please, explore Gabriolis' life on earth. If he's going to teach at their school, tell us how the Mon Colle Knights interact with him. Will he ever remember his life? If so, how will it happen? Don't leave me hanging; this is my favorite story on ff.net!

Is this the end of this fanfic?

Here's an idea: How about a fanfic where Mondo seeks or learns a way to restore all the friends he lost to Dread Dragon back to life. Or maybe you could use this suggestion as part of this fanfic.

update sooner

please write longer chapters and make this a g/r

later

Luca not wanting to be treated nicely? Well whaddya know. Nice fic!