| Reviews for What Child is This |
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Jedi-Bant 4/4/12 . chapter 1Cute |
Jedi-Bant 4/4/12 . chapter 1Cute |
dhh 3/7/08 . chapter 1I love your 'Rich Man'z Darling' but I hate stories where Clark has a sister and somehow she ends up having powers... |
jwstahle 2/7/07 . chapter 1i hope that is not the end of the story becasue if it is that is a bad ending in my opion. I think you are a very good writer and should write more stories. i will read them for sure if they have to do with smallville |
Renee6061 11/29/04 . chapter 1I enjoyed your version of events! Makes me wish all over again that the baby had survived, and that things had gone something like this. |
svfanforlife 4/29/04 . chapter 1Good story. I really liked it a lot. It's really cute and real. I hate the the Clark - Superpowers though. Well-written. Simon of Fanfiction |
SHSAlumni 4/5/04 . chapter 1Please, please, please separate this into CHAPTERS. |
The Die Hard 7/23/03 . chapter 1Hey, Last! Thanks for the review of Babysitter. (Good thing I hadn't already reviewed this one of yours, since they don't let you submit more than one review per chapter / story.) I, for one, thought this was a GREAT origin of "Supergirl" (they've only come out with, what, six or eight others already, so what's one more?) and Clark's choice of sacrifice was very much what you'd expect of a someday-Superman. And I LOVED the final scene. Snarking about Jonathan is practically a requirement. Jeeze, Bo Duke and his platitudes. I practically fall over every time they have a Dukes of Hazzard reference. Keep on flying! |
Pineapple1 6/6/03 . chapter 1Very interesting take on what Clark would be willing to give up for a sibling... Great story! |
Christina K 2/17/03 . chapter 1Okay, this amuses the heck out of me. "Bad baby!" *snerk* And I like the set-up, it's a lot of fun and makes sense. The follow-up story is just as fun, too. Great job. |
Kal-El 1/25/03 . chapter 1Very good! I like it a lot. I'm glad that you added the part about Clark getting his powers back. Now that there's actually sunlight again, he should really start getting them back. The boy's a giant solar battery. It would be interesting if Cara's genetic structure was affected by the power transfer, since she was at such an early developmental stage, and she now had somewhat kryptonian DNA. Oh well, I hope you'll continue with this a bit. It'd be interesting to see where this goes. |
Meret 1/16/03 . chapter 1What a lovely story! I can totally see Clark sacrificing his abilities like that. Great job! :) |
LastScorpion 1/14/03 . chapter 1You're right. I think I'll have to do a sequel so Clark can tell Lex more. Also I think it would be funny to have Lex and Clark and maybe Pete trying to keep people from noticing how bizarre the baby is. Clark got his powers back from Earth's Yellow Sun, which finally came out in the spring. Martha's powers are fading. I figure as soon as Cara can hurt her, that baby's weaned! And I'm pretending that since Cara was exposed prenatally, her powers will stick, thus making her Supergirl. |
becs1 1/14/03 . chapter 1I loved this story, but there were a few loose ends: -Clark needs to explain his origins to Lex -How did he get his gifts back so suddenly -Does Martha still have them? Also, I thought your idea for how Clark saved the baby was ingenious. Will there be a sequal, maybe with a toddler or teenage Cara? There is so much potential, with two superkids in the Kent house! Please? |
Jade Dagger 1/14/03 . chapter 1 Ohohoh! SUper GIrl! I LIKE this! |