you need to do a 3rd one i love them so much.

I love it! Are you going to create a story of this or a sequal to them both, or just leave it as it is? Cause I love it so much and I would love if there were more of these.

very complimenting to the first story.

cool

It's been a while since I read this and I don't remember the details, so I don't know why you reposted this, but it's still great. I really love it.

I love your writing. It's so beautiful, I find it hard to put into words. When I read these stories, they're like warm blankets on cold nights, I want to wrap the words around me and keep them forever. My chest is always tight, my eyes too wide, my mouth open. I can't get enough. It's amazing and wonderful and beautiful, the way you describe the moon and magic. I hope you find time to continue your writing of the Third Book of Renewal, or I will go insane! lol And I'm sure nobody would ever dare kill you over late work, because then there'd never be anymore.

^The Firefaery^

*blink blink* 0_0 Wow. That was definatly seep, yet TOTALLY cool!

I really don't know how you do it, but I admire it all the same. The associations I had while and after reading were both haunting and soothing... simultaneously. I'm not saying that the feeling is entirely new, but I never expected to find it with a fanfiction piece.

cool story but what happened to your fic 'the sun is the moon' (or something like that) I was looking for it only to find it's not up anymore. if you still have it can you re-post it. It's one of your best fics.

hmmm...i really enjoyed this. i think i might like magic of the moon better, probably because i'm addicted to angst, especially usagi and sakura and hikaru angst, but this wuz still great. anywayz, sorry for the short review, but it's 1:40 am and i have to work later. need sleep. just one thing. wut happened to "the sun is the moon"? did you delete it or something? i really liked it...i want it back.

A very nice and beautiful story/sequel! Among the best that I've read! You're a really great author! Will there be more of this? I love your stuff! :D

That was absolutely beautiful. And I mean every word of that- It's been a long time since I've seen words used in such an elegant fashion. Absolutely stunning...

Honestly, I had no idea what was going on most of the time. I had my guesses, but since I hadn't read the prequel... I guess it's kind of obvious that I couldn't understand.

Still, it didn't take away from the power of your story- you manage to make your story beautiful and yet mysterious, like something that can not be touched nor felt, only seen. I can honestly say that I was deeply moved, and that I am incredibly jealous of your talent.

This is very good sequel. YOu're such an excellent author. Hope I'll see more of your stories.

Nice sequel. Yue and Serenity bound by Magic and the Moon works very well. They are so similar, even in those they love most. Very nicely written. Thanks for writing. (P.S. Waiting very impatiently for the 3rd book in the Laws of Selene. I've reread the first 2 at least twice in the past few months--so good!)

Very Sweet and well done. ^.^