   starryeyes12 7/31/09 . chapter 1great story |
| laura carr 12/8/07 . chapter 1 great story. |
| starryeyes10 2/9/07 . chapter 1 great story. |
| Cassandra30 1/4/05 . chapter 1 Good story well handled. Maybe a bit rushed at the end but good. Keep writing. |
| Mooch 3/23/03 . chapter 1 write more! much more! like her pregnancy and the baby etc etc! |
| Ana 9/22/01 . chapter 1 A very well drawn out sweet story. More! |
| Noodle-rah 12/27/00 . chapter 1 YEEES! No more Brumby, no more Renee... YOU RULE! |
| Trin 12/22/00 . chapter 1 Best JAG one I've read so far. Keep writing, great work. |
| KCQuizza 12/12/00 . chapter 1 So Cute! |
| MacKenzie Rabb 11/24/00 . chapter 1 I loved it! Absolutely beautiful! Can you write that out in script form, and send it to "Blind as a bat" Belisario? LOL I wish the actual show was this interesting! Great work! MacKenzie |
| MEL 11/23/00 . chapter 1 I'm brief:
minimal gram or pronoun errors
touching, BELIVEABLE, story (a rare combo in fanfic)
enough tension w/o sounding like a soapera
calm enjoyable "beach read" type of story; good before bed for sweet dreams |
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