I've read almost every story on this fan fiction site, and I have to say that in my opinion, this story is so amazing, it might be the best one on here. You write so well, I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Absolutely amazing :)

I just gotta say how much I adore this story,

I love it so much everything you are a great writer. Ash is just the sweetest thing in the world and I'm actually surprised I like him cuz I normallly like bad boys and thats why I'm so into ego (but i use to be a /hard/ core poke. I still completly adore poke I'm just not as obsessed)

I'm still a bit weirded out and shocked that they give pecks on the LIPS for 3 years and havent gone out. Like Misty is being /really/ dence right now or if I was Misty i'd think Ash was leading me on. But come on. Its /Ash/

Misty its pretty damn obvious

The story is good, but there was one thing that was missing that largely turned me off. Quotation marks. It's fine and all that you forget them, but after Chapter 4 (or so it seems), it's as if you just say "Screw it!" (see, quotations for when people are speaking) and forgo it altogether. WHen you get the chance, please throw those little marks whe chracters are speaking so that the readers actually know that they are speaking out loud.

good story, not enough pokemon.

and they lived happily ever after, yay!

great story!

"...It was Misty who broke the cessation. She transversed the short distance between them, placed a hand upon the back of his neck and lowered his head until it was next to hers."

[insert]You idiot, she screamed into his face, before pushing him backwards and punching him in the shoulder. We could have avoided all of this, she said, before pulling him back to her.[/insert]

"Ash felt paralysed..."

Holy $&@! ! That was great!

such a cute story! i'm a pokeshipper all the way, as well as a contestshipper :)

keep up the good work, this story was amazing and it would be good to hear even more!

I loved this story, it's simply amazing (:

Thanks x

(Overall review) Beautiful story! You really took Ash and Misty's relationship through an emotional rollarcoaster that engrossed me from beginning to end. I loved how this fanfic intricately went into both sides of their relationship, enabling us to know exactly what was going through their minds. The inclusion of minor characters like Brock and Daisy were welcomed additions, too (and thanks for making Daisy less valley-girl-ish). The ending was also very fitting, and very beautiful. You did an excellent job with this story.

Yay! I really enjoyed this! :D

I really like this story so far! :D

Yay AshxMisty 4eva!

Though this is quite an old story, I just felt so compelled to write a review. This was an incredibly emotional story and I absolutely loved every minute of it. Your grammar is perfect and you display the characters with so much depth and description that I can almost picture the scenes in my head.

All in all, a great read and I hope you decide to rejoin your gift in writing.