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hydeandjackieforever20 2008-07-02 ch 9,	abuseI love this story ... Ash is so sweet in it!
Pink Chibi Mermaid 2008-03-16 ch 7,	abuseNice story
poka 2007-07-21 ch 9,	abusehey cultrivana! I reviewed this story once before under a different name, as I didn't have an account. But I gotta say, this is an awsome story. You write these stories so well gtg as its 2 in the morn. poka
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-30 ch 9,	abuseWow... It's...over. The ending is perfect. A wonderful ending to a great story! I can relate to how hard it would be to decide whether or not to date your best friend, because I "dated" (online and did meet), a guy who I actually met here, at this site! Awhile back, of course. Years ago. We became WONDERFUL friends, and dated after we met (we'd been talking nonstop for two years at that point). Things didn't work out...(long distance), and I have started to find him annoying, and he keeps trying to get me to "forgive him" and be his great ol' buddy again. Hah. It was a mutual breakup, but I don't want to make him think I'll date him again. Either way (I'm babbling), dating a friend really can ruin that friendship...as it did mine. But it can also make it blossom and grow, just like your story showed. Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed every word!
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-30 ch 8,	abuseHaha, Brock is a little behind the times. Well, personally, I think this has been great! One more to go! Sorry about my lame reviews. I read these last three chapters late last night, and couldn't review (pulled them on the screen, but the internet died). I had lots to say then, but not now. Darn!
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-30 ch 7,	abuseThis chapter wrapped up things quite nicely, if I do say so myself. It's almost as if you don't even need more!
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-29 ch 6,	abuseWowee! Brock is a lifesaver. You wrote his personality strikingly well, methinks. Very good, I say! I wondered what it was that Misty got! I thought they were new pills! (Pills that are three years old would be outdated, so I thought she'd gotten a new prescription!) Whew! I hope they work things out soon!
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-29 ch 5,	abuseAww, Darnit Ash! Just call her! This was long! Many flashbacks. But they definitely shed a little more light on the situation. I'm wondering what that nightmare was about, exactly. Good work! :)
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-29 ch 4,	abuseI'm glad you gave Daisy a personality. Ahh! So few people do that. But you made her into this sweet person who likes to throw playful insults at her sister... but who really DOES care, and is THERE for her... And who would love to help, but isn't sure how. Superb work. Anti-depressents, huh? Well, that is something to think about.
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-29 ch 3,	abuseMan, I could only imagine what they'll be thinking in the morning... or even right afterward. Hah. But in the heat of the moment, I guess you just don't realize those things! Not that I know that myself, of course. But GAH! I'm 20 and have never even had one real date! Looks like Misty is luckier than I am!
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-29 ch 2,	abusePeople actually go to clubs? Er... Haha! Kidding, kidding. That stuff bores me. :) I like how this chapter was written! Very very good! I would never have the courage to ask someone if they were a virgin if I liked them. Heehee! But I know a few guys who are waiting for marriage (or engagement), but they're not really what I am looking for, myself. I can sympathize with Misty here. I'm a virgin, myself, and guys chase after me until they find out I'm relgious and I'm waiting for marriage... also, I collect "My Little Pony", so I suppose that's a turnoff to a few guys. HAH!
Kitten Kisses 2006-11-29 ch 1,	abuseA good chapter! I only found one mistake that I remember. 'your' instead of 'you're'. :) I like how this is moving. Not fast, not slow. You've set up the characters perfectly so far. Very nice! Misty's thoughts about how he could break her heart so easily are so true. Ever loved someone who didn't love you back? Everything they say means something. Whether it's good or bad...it has meaning. One simple word or phrase can depress or delight you. I love how you had Ash be secretly delighted when Misty's dates go wrong. I rather felt the same when a guy I like(d) told me he and his girlfriend here fighting. I told him that was "too bad" (and said other nice things to make him feel better), but in my mind I felt rather excited. "Maybe I'll have a chance!" (Yeah freakin' right.) I like where this is going. Must continue. :)
Onion Man Chive 2006-02-20 ch 9,	abuseJesus Christ in a cracker, you almost made Onion Man cry! That just doesn't happen with me, believe you me. Believe it or not, you have encouraged me to make a pokemon story myself. Keep your eye out for me in a few days. In the meantime, keep up the good work.
Dena Setsuko 2006-01-08 ch 9,	abusegreat job!
lala 2005-12-23 ch 8, anon.	abuseur fanfic is ... ok i guess

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