wicked. awesome story homes. that was interesting.

dat was so great!! keep up d good work!!

*cries* ok that little moment with suboshi and yuriren was just to heartrenching...this was so sad...poor widdle suboshi-chan..keep it up!

e! that was a realli good story!

Obviously these flamers of yours do not understand the concept of QUALITY over QUANTITY.

Anyway, be careful with your tenses. You keep using past and present tense interchangably.

*hums 'Forever Love'* ^_^

im new to the Fushigi fandom but i can already say my favorite characters are Amiboshi and Suboshi ^^ i really enjoyed reading this fic seeing as how many people hated Suboshi for killing Tama-chan's family. Poor suboshi! he suffered a lot too. he lost the only person that mattered most to him ;_; i loved the fic! i really like that relationship Ami and Su chan share! ^^ this fic made my day and i hope you write more!!

Hey remember me. Just to let you know that signed review that was sent to you wasn't from me it was from my dumb @$* sister. I do think this story is good though I'll give you credit for that. Maybe you should watch who your criticing(I know I probaly spelled that wrong fanfiction doesn't have spell checks) You don't have to go up and bother my friend ok she is going through hell right now and you need to back off. If you want to e-mail me you know what my e-mail adress is.

Later Days
Death Angel

P.S. sorry for taking up your review space just had to get that out.

Well.I may not agree with your methods, but, I can, and will, accept them. And, well.thanks. I guess I can see that. GOD I HATE BEING TWELVE! The kids at my school are pains in the @$$! But, what the heck. Just, if you're going to flame my stories, just keep in mind that I am only twelve, and my state's demented and doesn't show us any new episodes!

Sayonara,
Hikari no Ryu Sakura

P.S. Being right to the point is good, but you could add a couple good comments, too. Just a suggestion! Probably not a very good one, but that's me for ya! :)

WHY CAN'T YOU GET IT RIGHT!?! IT'S THE SISTERHOOD OF THE DRAGON! And, ah-ha! So you admit it. You've only ever written 1 story. Pathetic. Maybe you should spend more time writing and less time critizing! A little harsh? IT WAS DOWNRIGHT MEAN! Don't you know what a "well-rounded critic" is? It points out the good as well as the bad points of a story! And IT'S A **' FANFICTION! I'M A FREAKIN' 12 YEAR OLD! No one expects my story to be perfect except you! Also, when a "well-rounded critic" points out the bad points of a story, they're supposed to do it in a POLITE way! Not call formatting **, characters Mary Sues (which Tealie is NOT, she has a very flammable temper), tell them about the show (and FYI, in Massachusetts they haven't REAVELED that Isis is a goddess! I've only gotten that from reading FanFictions!), and mention bad points of the writers friends stories at the same time! I wouldn't have minded your review as much if you'd respected my feelings while doing it. Just so you know, I wouldn't get so mad if.well, let's just say I am the single most unpopular girl in school, my grades are slipping, my family hates me, I have to go to a **' psycologist, I'm not athletic, and, well, I thought I'd found the one thing I was good at. Writing. Sigh.there's another dream I can kiss good-bye.

Sayonara,
Hikari no Ryu Sakura

P.S. You were right about something, I need to change Chronicle 1 around a bit.

P.P.S. Sorry. I didn't mean to be such a **.

P.P.S.S. "Hate" is spelled H-A-T-E, not H-A-T.

Wow. Even your FictionPress.net stories suck. Sayonara,Hikari no Ryu Sakura

P.S. You'd better leave Yami no Ryu Sakura, Tamashii no Ryu Sakura, and me alone if you know what's good for you!

P.P.S. However, I do give you permission to email me with any complaints about our stories. At least I can delete those.

P.P.S.S. Tamashii no Ryu Sakura says your review to The Chronicles of Tealie was a load of **.

Okay. My version of your review.

1. My formatting is not my fault. How do you change it to HTML anyway!?

2. WHAT DO YOU MEAN, NO ONE WILL READ IT!!?? HAVEN'T YOU NOTICED HOW MANY PEOPLE HAVE REVIEWED!?!?! YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WHO EVER FLAMED ME!

3. Mary Sue? YOU WILL DIE FOR THAT!

4. Seto is not OC. He is just struggling in himself due to having a sister who likes Yugi! Should he be friends, or not?

5. Seto may not have a twin in the show, but that's something I like to call an original character!

6. Didn't you read it? Seto didn't want to get seperated from Tealie! It wasn't his fault! If he'd kept resisting, Seto and Mokuba would have gotten seperated too!

7. Yes, I have watched the show, and I know Isis has the Tauk, but the whole idea there is that I knew I wanted "Tealie" to have a Yami!! Get it?

8. I HAVE PLENTY OF DETAIL!

Okay, I think I made my point. You know, if you keep flaming, no one's gonna want to read your stories! NOW STAY AWAY FROM THE RYU SAKURA GIRLS! Kapeesh?

Sayonara,
Hikari no Ryu Sakura

P.S. If you feel the need to reply to this, my email is panders@fastdial.net. There.

Bravo, Bravo! OK so maybe I'm not the biggest FY fan in the world, *embaresed sweatdrop* but I do like this. I am really impressed by the use of the present tense. It makes you feel so. there or something. Kudos on a job well done.
SharonFish

Hello Yami No Tenshi, it's me Cherryblossom, I want to thank you so much! Only three people in my class of 23 have gotten in the 'A' level and the rest have failed.

Yami: You are kidding are you not?

CB: No, I ma not, no one got a mark in the 'B' or 'C' section, out of those people I have gotten 95 percent, 19 out of 20.

I accidently forgot to answer one question and taht is why i lost the mark.

Yami: Quite careless of you.

CB: I know, but I can not believe how bad my class is, Yami No Tenshi i am writing this in another anme because:

1) This computer will not let me review chapter 1 again, that is why you can only review once per chapter, it will be hard to keep track.

2) My e-mail account always freezes when I try ro e-mail someone back, I should get a new account, do you think it's my computer or just yahoo?

Yami: Many problems,yet so little contact.

And Yami No Tenshi, I'd like to ask you if you could help me with something, I must have the answer before Monday.

We are studying about lieutenant-governor Simcoe and his councils, Legislative Council, Executive Council and also the Legislative assembly.

My teacher wants us to see what those groups are called in our time, say for lieutenent-governor, do we have a lieutenent governor? If we do, then is he/she called the lieutenant-governor, is the governor only male and only British?

So, this is my work, this is how the paper looks like:

GRADE 7 HISTORY- BRITISH NORTH AMERICA
Chapter 7- Upper Canada: The New Province

Review the pages in your textbook describing the government that John Graves Simcoe created for upper Canada. Do some research to find out how the provincial government of today compares to the government of upper Canada. Use the information you find to complete the chart below.


Lieutenant- Governor( Beneath there is a box)
(beside it it says) Upper Canda and then Provincial Government. ( All three of those ahve boxes below them.)

Executive Council (box below) Upper Canda and beside it, Provincial Government (both have boxes below)

Legislative Council ( the same thing as teh other examples)

Legislative Assembly ( the same thing)

If you can help me Yami No Tenshi, I'd appreciate it, I shall continue my research now.

PS: YOU ARE THE GREATEST FRIEND A PERSON COULD HAVE! ;_;

Yami: Bye.

CB: Bye!

Wow that was interesting. Hey I checked out your reviews and notice that my ex-friend Marie sent you a review. I'm sorry for her actions. She and I share this name so when she reads the reviews your's mad her mad. Anyway I love this it's a great story. Oh yeah and all that bad stuff that had happened like the e-mail and stuff, I had nothing to do with it. Like I said this is a intense story I love it

Love it. I read other reviews that people sent you. Those death angels sound like major **. Once again love your story.