This story totally made me cry. God. And my step-brothers are even in the room!

*sniffle*

I liked this story a whole lot.

Great angsy fic! This story was put together very nicely. Good job! It's going on my favorites list =)

Oh this was lovely. I especially like the flashbacks with his mum! Absolutly lovely!

I love it! I'd ask you to continue but that would be plain old stupid of me!
~Kami

Sweet ending :)

I loved this fic so much. It was so beautifully written with the inner dialogue and everything. All without a title too.

you're story made me cry lol..

Awh. What a great fic. Really, I loved it. :o) As for the title, maybe something like 'Never Leave Her'?

*sniffle*

That was so sweet! An excellent take on Hyde's past, his inner thoughts on love, and his character in general. Two big thumbs up!

O wow, that was so good! Really heartfelt lol. Great ending!

Loved it a lot! I love your style. Sounds so much like Hyde. Good Stuff man!

ok, I LOVE your story! Anywho, can I post a fake flame in hopes that you will put it in your book? well here is the fake flame:

yer storee es dum what where u thunkin?

(I got one similiar to this a while back, I thought it was funny)

I luv it!!! Please write more!!! I will be waiting for the next chapter, and I hope to see it soon!!!!
~Kami

This is really great. You have really captured what their characters are and how I think they would feel! And you did it without being too sappy---very important. I'm anxious to see if you will write more, though this is good ending if you decided to leave it. Bravo!

this is so good! i luff hearing hyde's thoughts, its like 'awww', lol. as far as a title, i dunno... but anywayz yeah you're doing great, can't wait to read part four.