Very well written! I love it!

hey, nice story :)

Thought you might want to know something though.

Chapters 4 and 6 are the same chapter, repeating it's self, and Chapter 8 doesn't contain part of the story, only authors notes even though I'm pretty sure it should contain something.

I'm crying! Poor Leggy!

I am in hope you intend to add more to this wonderful story very soon. such an interesting concept. What will happen if true to the story she falls in love with farimer? poor leggy

*Sniff* You are so mean to poor Legolas! Anyway, that is very good! Do you like Loreena McKennet? I do. That song's called Dante's Prayer, right?

I love this story! Great job, really excellant! Oh, just to let you know, you keep saying "the rohirrim warrior" when referring to Eomer. Rohirrim is plural. You should say "The rohirric warrior". Good work!

Cofusing as this chapter is a repeat of chapter 4

Dante's Prayer! I love that song! For everyone else's information, the song is by Loreena McKennitt, a Scots-Irish Canadian singer and harp player who is one of my favorite artists. I actually wrote the song lyrics out in tengwar once. It gave me much comfort during a time when one of my friendships was splintering.

(You should have credited Loreena McKennitt with the words, though.)

What happened?! Last time I checked, this chapter detailed the same tale as the first chapter, but from Eowyn's POV. What did you take that out for?! You might have seen it as useless, but it's valuable insight into different opinions! Why did you have to remove it?!?!

sad, sad ending...*sighs* but still wonderful story!

~Angel of Death~

ok, i give up! EOWYN THAT STUPID **, SHE DOESN'T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING! SHE DOESN'T EVEN KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! SHE SHOULD JUST SHUT THE ** UP AND AND

GOD I FEEL LIKE THROTTLING SOMETHING! THAT **!

ok, ok, i'm calm now...please don't think i'm a violent person, cuz i'm not...i just hate Eowyn right now...

onto the next chappie! ^_^

~Angel of Death~

ACK!

*tears*
ok now, don't hate Eowyn, don't hate Eowyn, don't hate Eowyn...if i keep chanting that, it might work...stupid Eowyn...then again, i guess Leggy was sorta rude, but hey, he's tired!

~Angel of Death~

...
god, this is good...

~Angel of Death~

oh
*sniffs and grabs a tissue*
that's so sad...poor Leggy...*bursts into tears* stupid Eowyn...
onto the next chappie! ^_^

~Angel of Death~