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| mistylove 2000 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusei'm cunfused |
| Brian1 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story =D Heh heh...poor Ash...I think. Didn't expect Haurka to go for Gary, especially since he's been in Pallet...but this was written before that was common knowledge, so yeah. ^_^v |
| Stardust10 2003-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLOL!! This was sooo funny! It was a little confusing trying to remember who was saying what, but I think that is really the only way you could have done it. That kind of thing is hard to write. But it was sooooo funny!!! Perfect portrayal of... how can I put this nicely... the male ego. *LOL I think Brock might be rubbing off on him* |
| LiL MiSs FoXy 2003-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute!!! Lol, Ash seemed so full of himself lol. It was hilarious. I loved it. |
| Joy-girl 2003-01-17 ch 1, | abuseIt was cute ^_^ a tad confusing... but cute ^_^ |
| Loon Of The Fruits 2003-01-16 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME!!! I love your stories! This was VERY sweet! I think Kimi (English name), Misty, and Ash would be the perfect travel partners!! |