Really good story. Very well written and realistic.

This was really cute. The ending felt too abrupt. Perhaps an epilogue would have helped to give some sort of closure.
Still, I like this very much. A few minor mistakes here and there but nothing too serious.

Good job.

Bravo!

Been reading this compulsively since last night and seriously neglecting my family on boxing day!

It is rare to read an author who is not afraid of using adult vocab, you had me running for at least 3 times and I pride myself on my wide vocabulary.

It is also rare to read a believable Kouga romance, he is often painted as a comical figure in the anime/manga... this feeds through to the fanfictions, either he is kept dim and stupid or he is written completely OOC to suit some fangirls alpha male fantasy.

Your transformation of his character was well motivated and believable and I was so happy when he started acting more "wolfish" in later chapters. There was a big grin on my face.

I liked Sango too, she is very underused in fanfiction in general and I liked this original pairing. I kind of felt sorry for both her and Kouga in the anime so I enjoyed this story that gives them both a staring roll and an almost happily ever after.

My one criticism would be that it is at times hard to follow the dialogue with no indication as to who is talking until the next line of text, if at all. True, I can make an educated guess but once or twice I was rereading passages to make it clear who was saying what.

It’s a mistake I make myself all the time so that is why I have picked up on it. Otherwise this is a wonderful self-contained little story and I enjoyed reading it. I’d love to see a continuation but the ending is strong enough to stand on its own. Thank you for writing this. You’re on my favourites.

Very nice. It would be nice to see what happens to them later in life.

Very beautiful, especially for such an alternative pairing. Kudos to you! ^_^

I remember reading this story months ago, and loving every minute of it. Rereading it again the second time around is still worth it! This is still The very best Kouga/Sango story I have ever come across. Thanks! Good work here!

Awesomest story ever!

yay!

SWET! *punches the air* I love Kouga and Sango stories! KAWAI!

Awwessome!

Wicked story!!

Whoa, intense and awesome!

So col.

Since I last read this fic, I keept thinking about the little details that make it a gem, so thank you for sharing your talent!

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Oh wow! That kiss was simple adorable and the way he declared his love very much like him!! You're a great writer and the pairing is my new favorite beside my own obsession!

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