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Choas Babe
2006-12-16
ch 19,
abuseI thought Legolas was calling him Fido?
Rikki
2006-11-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseI posted this as a bulletin in MySpace, along with the prologue. Enjoy.

Rikki's Notes: I love this story. I hate Fanfiction. I hate MySpace. As you can see, sometimes bridges must be crossed to get to where we want to be...And all that Jazz.
Despite my hatred of MySpace as a whole & the conformist idea that we all must be members & adore it & use it for absofreakinglutely everything, ignoring our friends in reality so we can feel superior for having so many friends on MySpace who reply to the comments we leave & the bulletins we post because they get emails when something happens. -not because they check regularly to demonstrate their friendship or even their interest in your blog, I use it quite frequently to make sure people get important messages such as this one...as well as a few boring ones.
Disclaimer: I didn't write this. I am not RiseAgainPhoenix. I don't know who RiseAgainPhoenix is -only that she writes great stories.
I have 2 stories on that I love. This is one of them. Again...I did not write it. Now just read it fuc...sillyheads.
Claustrophobic Clarisse
2006-10-19
ch 31, anon.
abuseWell I'm not a fan of reviewing, hence I haven't reviewed every chapter. I actually forgot (lord knows how) what this story was called & didn't get to finish it the first time i started reading.
I'm not actully so interested in fanfiction so I thought I'd let you know that word of mouth travels far (I've been reading too long & I'm getting melodramatic). This was reccommended to me by a friend & I love it so much you have a permanent post on my blog. Not that I'd know if my friends read it because they never leave comments...
Anyway, I'd like to say thankyou for creating this story because it's been a nice does of fantasy to break up the real world that brings tears to my eyes.
Love your work darl. (hate the word darl though)
Jelly
2006-10-04
ch 14, anon.
abuseYou don't have many reviews because people are too busy reading your story. Continue pestering us, we shall continue to review.
I like your story. Yay story. Now go away, I'm trying to read it.
Rikki
2006-10-03
ch 8, anon.
abuseWell...considering you're not yet a celebrity & I don't feel I yet have to prove that you're a normal person, here's a vaguely shotty-looking ego-boost for you.
Ohmigod! I love your stories, lyke, so much! omigawd! alfonso the ring is like, the greatest fanfic I have ever read...except for maybe never leave fanfiction lying around...but I haven't finished your stories yet. I've barely started & im so, lyke, totally hooked! I tell all my friends about you. I was just wondering if, lyke, you had to do a parody on something for an english essay or, lyke, whatever, because telling the story from the ring's perspective is a fairly dumb-stupid-english-teacher type of thing to do...but whatever, you so nailed it. so much so i bet if you did do it for an english story, your teacher would pick out all the punctuation mistakes you possibly made in a novel-sized story & give you a ** mark...because that's what english teachers do...they like mediochrity.
anyways, it's lyke, the second best story i've read so far & congrats for a) making a mary-sue of alfonso & getting away with it b) creating a long-winded story that doesn't seem long winded c) making really obvious slash without obvious graphics. they're probably good when you're following the story for that reason but not so hot when you're not looking for them d) just cause!
I am so, lyke, giving you another write-up nin my blog!
Mkay babe, here's where I leave you to sit & wonder whether any of that is actually complimenting you. :P
moonshinemustardseed
2006-01-05
ch 4,
abuseFedEx would have gotten me to him in twice the comfort and half the time. Besides, did he even have a finger anymore? Strange.

ohmygod, i fell out of my seat i was laughing so hard. This crack is the greatest thing since the super secret diaries. i bow before you humbly
moonshinemustardseed
2006-01-05
ch 2,
abusekeke, you are definatly a very clever person, and my new favorite author.
Middle-Earthian
2005-08-02
ch 4,
abuseWow... I actually wondered why Sauron wanted the Ring becuase he doesn't have any fingers too! ...doesn that mean that I'm as crazy as Al?
Prophet-Song
2005-02-26
ch 31,
abuseI applaud thee! Tis magnifico, this story!!
MordeMe
2005-02-17
ch 5,
abuseThis is hilarious!
crazyroninchic
2005-02-09
ch 18,
abuseHa! i loved those last four lines! That was excellent.
crazyroninchic
2005-02-04
ch 10,
abuseThat was great! I love Legolas's line (at least I think it was Legolas...) "You wanna go, **?" Just picturing a serene and well-mannered Elf saying that just cracks me up!
Forsaken Child
2004-12-27
ch 31,
abuseAmazing! No, really, I loved each and every bit of it so far. Of course I'll be darting off to read Part II as I saw you have (was it 9?) chapters up already. I simply can not wait!
Would I not be so tired right now (and it IS 4am in the morning... ) I would read it now, unfortunately, it'll have to wait.

By the way- as soon as I'm done reading all of the chapters you ahve up, I'll be sure to put up a review from my blog. You desrve the plug. :3
Mint Bubble
2004-12-26
ch 31,
abusehee hee! this is excellent! and legolas is extremely amusing. i am not entirely sure why i think this, as i actually completely love him, but he is apparently gay. so will just go back to being amused. write on!
am off to read part 2. toodles
=)
Kojuro
2004-11-01
ch 2, anon.
abuseI'm an avid lord of the rings fan, and OMG this is great! This had me rolling on the floor just during the first chapter! I even had to add this to my damn favorites list so I can read the whole thing!
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