Love.

Each and every word on each and every line in each and every sense of emotion pounding through. LOVE.

beautiful, I'm wordless

wow, this was a beautiful story. I admit the style it was written on took some getting used to, but you've got a way with words not many people do. Your writing is unique. I really loved this, the emotions, the descriptions. Wonderfully done.
Patrícia

I'm just obsessed with the end. I can't tell you. I read it aloud because it just sounded so beautiful and awsome and I loved it so much. It is perfect and sad and tragic and simple. I love it! I'm obsessed! Great job.

No matter how many Alias fanfics I read, I always come back to this.

It is without a doubt the most brilliant Alias fic I've ever read.

It is perfection. The ending is superb, the middle heart-breaking and the beginning sets the scene so well.

I can't believe that more people haven't reviewed it...

*blinks tears away*

So, I'm plodding along with my sad excuse for a Jan challengefic, and decide to head on over to CM to, ahem, "scope out the competition." Or something like that, lol. Saw your piece, read your piece, and now I'm back looking at mine staring down the delete key. :)

Wonderful, wonderful piece, all the more startling because it is your first published in this fandom. Your pacing was dead-on, I loved how you really just took your time with it. I hope you stick around for a while - I'd love to read more alias fic by you one of these days~

Jess

WOW!! I loved this fic...even though I'm not sure what the end is supposed to mean...(maybe I'm dumb) but I think we are supposed to draw our own conclusions...I would like to think they are going to get together...I absolutely LOVED this...i hope you write more stuff.

I read this at CM, and had to come here to write that this fic is amazing! Really powerful! I love the angst, and the plot is just wonderful! Great, great job!

JesusChristAlmighty. i think this is perhaps the greatest fanfic i've read in all my history of fandom. maybe it's the mood i'm in or the fact that i read the whole thing aloud for some reason (i tend to do that with poetic stories such as this, don't ask why) but this was truly beautiful and mesmerizin. you had me hooked from line one and it played with my heart. it was strange, the style was so low-key and calm so i was hypnotized while i subconcious part of me was experiencing a myriad of emotions that is leaving me stunned. this is a masterpiece. you should definitely be proud of this and i hope you keep writing. amazing.

Heartbreakingly, beautifully done. Speechless for much else of a commentary. :-)

god, this is great! very, very good!

I have little or nothing left to say. This was positively stunning, amazing, and hit me right in the stomach. You had me hooked from the first line, and I really just... this is brilliant. You've done such an amazing job. And it very much isn't a disgrace. :)

Oh my god. That was incredible. Wonderful job. I loved how poetic it all was, how the shock near the end was sort of a shock and, at the same time, almost expected. You're a wonderful author. Thanks for posting.

this is the best Alias fic ive read so far. It is also very unique. It is very realistic and well written. keep writting, its wonderful