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Reviews For: The Founders of the Feast PG13 rated version

KikiDiki
2003-01-18
ch 1,
abuseaww that was a cute fic. it was written nicely. dialogue was good and everybody was all funny and in character. but kept hoping for something suprising to happen like they'd run into jayne and youd see new insight into that situation or like Mal and Kaylee were having a secret affair back then. something that would have added a diffent layer to the current episodes.
Now im off to go read the R-rated version.
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