Reviews for The Dreaded First Date

Reviews For: The Dreaded First Date

catseyebow 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abusethis was nice
Chaos-Paladin 2005-03-05 ch 1,	abusethat was hilarious. you are a TERRIFIC one-shot writer! ASH: sappy guy to the rescue! talk about hysterical!
Marlex 2005-02-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was great. I love the style you wrote it in, using first person and the present tense. It was a great, sweet, fluffy, romantic story.
Artistshipper 2004-12-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseDarn... now i want to ask You out... Amazing work. you always were great at the Ash and Misty short & sweets.
pikapiaaml 2003-01-22 ch 1,	abuseFirst I'm a major fan of yours! I read your stories on thepokemontower.com and I did on serebii.net (Prof. Clo) until it disappeared. Anyway, I loved it! Funny how Ash seemed to think about his stomach the whole way through! Super sweet, but I bet everyone says that! Can't wait for your next story!
Joy-girl 2003-01-21 ch 1,	abuseIt was cute ^_^ Different from the usual first date stuff
Brock's Geodude 2003-01-19 ch 1,	abuseHey Togepretty, this is Geodude from BG, SNF, OPS... Great fic! I think that's exactly the way Ash would think on a first date. I loved it!
Loon Of The Fruits 2003-01-16 ch 1,	abuseAwww!!!! So sweet!! This one was pretty humorous too! I LOVE it!!!!!!
Sarah Kerrigan 2003-01-16 ch 1,	abuseYay! Is really cute! I just love this fic ^^. ¡Saludos!
smiley 2003-01-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseAWWW!!!! SO SWEET!!! That was a very good story. :)
Togepretty 2003-01-16 ch 1,	abuseYeah, I know what you mean about them staying in the same hotel room. But this is suppose to take place when they are a little older, and I'm thinking that a teenage Misty might not want to sleep in the same room as two hormonal boys. Especially not with one whom she's dating. ^_~ Also, it should remind you of your style. This story was inspired by "As The Ball Drops". I wuvs that story. huggles the story I always wanted to do an Ash POV, and the way you wrote him in that story is exactly how I see him thinking about stuff. So that's why I chose to write this story in that way. I knew I should have mentioned the story. kicks herself for not mentioning the inspiration, and goes to edit it into the author's notes
Dragoness 2003-01-16 ch 1,	abuseHeheheh that was cute.. Ash is all..well..Ashy I guess. ^_^;;; Clueless little lucky bastard, lol >u<;; Really, he's got an incurable case of beginner's luck. ^_^;;; Heheh, my only problem with this is something that bugs me with almost every single fic of this nature.. Get ready, this is quickly becoming a pet peeve.. Ahem......ASH MISTY AND BROCK ALWAYS SHARE THE SAME ROOM WHEN THEY STAY AT A POKEMON CENTER!!!! GAH. -_-;;;; Sorry, but that just annoys me more and more every time I see it...I mean, it was a cute little change from the classic kiss-at-the-door scene, but.. I dunno, he coulda just kissed her goodnight somewhere else, like earlier or something...Ah well...Gah.. pkmn's on now.. Eehee. It's just the Pichu one.. Erm, fic. Right. I haven't finished reviewing yet. Heheh.. Well, other than that one itty bitty scene, let's say that I really did like it.. Heheh, it was kinda like..um..like dah. dah-dah. dah-dah. Umm.. You know what I mean? All..Ah nevermind. It worked. Lol, actually, it kinda reminded me of my style with the holiday fics..Hehee..^.^;;; Ooh gah back to commercial. blinks Lol, I should probably wrap this up.. Okay.. Tat's all! ^_^;;;
Bayleef 2003-01-16 ch 1,	abuseAww, that story was sweet! And funny too, heehee. I love all your stories but this one is one of me faves. I like the way Ash keeps wondering if he's doing something wrong and when he thinks he's "Sappy man". lol, love it Togepretty, keep up the good work and hope to read even more stories from you. Bay Bay! Bayleef

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