Cool story! Im glad you did the alternate ending... I couldnt live with the other one!

love this ending!

oh, wow this is a really good story. Hope you do continue it!

ahhh...keep going! you can't stop there! that was really really good! keep writing!

definitely (yeah i know i can't spell) did not like the sad ending. I mean, okay i did. But not in that happy, feel good sorta way. Like it was good so i liked it kinda way. Please post the other ending you wrote!