please continue! so good!

continue, continue, CON-**-TINUE!

It was cute.

Should I point out that this fanfiction deserves to be continued?! lol

Yes, TBC! Please write the next chappie! This story is interesting, I can't wait for you to continue. I beg you to keep going, this fiction will be on my fav. stories list!

what? what happened???? oh pleaseeeeee!! continueeee please please! i like this fic, i got hook up to see whats next!! =O)

Yay! you did some pokemon stuff again! It's great to read something good now that you and karen started something up! I'm dying to know more so update!!!

-Ian
PS: Congrats on the over 100 member mark on Seto Eyes!

Not nice! Hwah ha! What do you mean, "t.b.c.?" I think I'm going to go erase that question mark... *tries frantically to rub the question mark off with a rubber eraser mouse icon* Wah! It won't work. -_-; Continue, continue!!! ...and delete the question mark while you're at it... ha, ha, ha... just kidding! Mmmmm... if you wrote it over a year ago, why do you have to torture us with making us wait? FINISH!! :D Hee, hee! *looks at the screen impatiently* ^_~

Well, an Ash and Misty fight is a conventional plot device for fanfic authors to use. I can imagine that turning 16 has some significance for Misty and she wants to have a very special day. Here's hoping Ash gets a clue and treats her like the woman she's becoming.

This is great! Please please continue! ^____^

Wonder what's wrong with Misty..... continue!!!

Kawaii Ang! ^.^

Angelstars has finally returned to the pokemon section, yay! very very good start, keep up the great work!

Aw no... don't leave it there... >.!

This is good, please continue! make it a bit angst to, angst ash and misty is so good!