nice fanfiction

Cute ^^

So sweet! I love your J&D fics, keep it up!

Wai~~! It's so... cute! And fluff-ish! :D
And so very, very fluffish, with all the cute and the fluff and the kawainess, and ultimate fluff, and--!

*explodes from fluff overload*

I liked that. ^-^ That was sweet, hope you make similar ones, buh-bye!

-Joce

Aww, how cute! I loved it how you captured Jak personality!

Great Story! I loved it! more please?!

Aw! This is so adorable! They make a great team! ^_~

Well done, you've written this beautifully and captured such spirit and mutual understanding so easily... I've very impressed!

~Hwoarang Girl~

I really loved this story. It was kind of sad in the beginning but the end was so cute! It was a very original, yet creative, story.

Cute! *hugs Jak and Daxter*. Keep up the good work!

This was cute. You really could describe their personalities good... it's sooooo cute:)

LOL thats nice, keep up the good work!!!

That was excellent! Keep it up. I love Jak and Daxter!

MMG: AH HAHAHA^______^ soooooo cute why dont you do more i think that your a reaaally good writer... my stuff sounds kinda stup id but ohwell... ^_~ seya^_^

I LOVE Jak and Daxter!!! This was great!!! PLEASE write more stories like this!!! PLEASE!!!