Wow...running into the end of that last chapter was like running into a wall at full tilt. I sincerely hope you will be continuing the story, as I'm very intrigued by the warped movie events.

Phantom Jedi

whoo, home stretch! great story so far, can't wait for more. its awesome-tastic
so... luke's gonna get a new hand, leia cant admits she's in love w/ han, and han's crushed. cant't wait for the next chappy!

he- they- she- i- argh! now they're gonna be captured. now what?!
oh yeah, i can read the next chapter. :D great story!

argh! luke is an idiot! a nice, jedi idiot, but an idiot nonetheless.
great chapter. i love it!

NO! PADME CAN'T DIE!
I loved the confrontation between padme and vader/ani. it was great

so yoda did know about Padme's pregnancy. Hm. interesting, that is. :D great so far!

NO! YOU KILLED OBI-WAN!
though, he was gonna die anyways... and now he can talk w/ luke and leia via ghost form. so i suppose its all good...
great story, i like it!

Amazing story!

I love this story. It's one of the few Star Wars stories with good charactization. If you're done with it, please add in a chapter saying how it would end.

I found this story on TFN and came over here to see if it was completed. I think this is one of the few stories that I've read that not only is really well written but also keeps all the characters true to themselves. Is there any chance that this story was forgotten? It's be a shame if it was left unfinished.

Wow... This is a great story, and its definately the first one I read that's like this.
I saw that it hasn't been updated in a while, but I just wanted you to know its really good.
You diserve more reviews. 'grin'

Please start this up again. You are so close to finishing it!

This AU is wonderful, you have such a good imagination and talent for telling tales. It's hard to see how Vader convinces himself that bringing Luke and Leia to the dark side is the only way out for him. You have managed to make him so very human.

I'm looking forward to the next installment, good luck with your muses!

I like the pace this story is going at - even though it jumps about in time, you have lined out the motivations of the characters very well. I'm still a bit stunned that Anakin would leave his wife to face the Jedi council alone, but I guess somewhere inside he's still that scared slave boy from Tattooine. My heart goes out to Padme, and Leia, and Luke who is no doubt about to find out why you don't mess with a sith.

yeha, some obi-wan, though i guess he won't be a prominant figure in this !