Hey Stratagirl! :D

I have a spare period at school and thought I would read your Sailor Moon story, lol :) This chapter is really long! Sometimes its good to split them into two. And a great tip that another writer gave me when i was a rookie is when people are talking put it on a new line and put a space between it because it makes it so much easier to read. :) Oh they also said never use caps because your not allowed to. Personally I like you style of describing things in your Card Captors story :D cause its a little confusing in this story and its nice when your describe people. Sorry I can't give you any advice about characters and so on cause Im finding it really hard to remember Sailor Moon. I would have been like 6 when i last watched it lol.:P Its an interesting concept and you have alot of good ideas but I have to say i personally liked your Card Captors story better. Hmm yeah the rules have changed a bit lol but hopefully you'll update some things soon. :D

Cyaz later!

WaterSpirit1 :D

Interesting, yet very hard to read, but I really liked it. RW and SM are my favorite animes.

I'm really glad you are enjoying my stories too.

Talk to ya soon, bye!

SAM

Wow..this chapter has more words then all my archived words..XD Anyways, it's good so far.

GOOD.

DEMO, YOU COULD MAKE IT A BIT SHORTER?

I REALLY THOUGHT THAT IT WOULD BE SHORTER, EVEN AFTER FINDING OUT HOW MANY WORDS WERE ON IT.

I WOULD MAKE THE OTHER CHAPTER SHORT.

NOT TOO SHORT, DEMO NOT TOO LONG EITHER.

R&R MY FANFIC THE BIG PLAN: CHIBIUSA'S DESTINY?

I KNOW THAT I SCREWED UP ON IT, DEMO I CAN'T SEEM TO BE ABLE TO ADD MY OTHER STORY ON FFN.

MY COMPUTER IS BAKA, WHAT CAN I SAY.

SEE YA LATER!

OH YEAH, EMAIL ME.

IF YOU WANT A HAND EDITING.

WHITEANGELP SAID SHE WANTED ME TO EDIT HER STORIES, DEMO SHE HASN'T CONTACTED ME! *SNIFFS*

ANYWAYS, YOU MUST EMAIL ME!

MY EMAIL IS

IF YOU LOSE IT, CHECK MY BIO.

I THINK I POSTED IT...

THANX AGAIN!

AMI MIZUNO