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| My-name-is-foxglove 2008-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseOk, umm...this...is-well, it's nice but--I mean the ending was like "whoa, wait, where'd that come from? Wait, wait, literate please!" Otherwise it's..well, nice, cute-sih, in a way just kinda- uncomfortable I guess... Sorry if I offended you but those are my honest thougths on it, I still liked it though, it was nicely angsty, if that makes sense... |
| Savie 2006-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this, the ending is really nice. half way through the fanfic i listen to the song with it, it a pretty song and goes well. very general, i like when they keep there character and how ranma made a gentle move, keep it up ^_^ |
| Silver Warrior 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abusewow. Totally unexpected ending. But very nice, and sweet too. |
| Angela 2004-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! Way sweet and the lyrics from the song matches really well. I love this heaps ^^ |
| Crash 2003-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a great fic.I think you should continue. |
| NekoYokai 2003-05-27 ch 1, | abuseBad?! This is great! Make more waff plz! ;) Akane-obsessed |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-03-25 ch 1, | abusePut a space between each dot. Always lable songfics! Its disturbing to step across one by accident! |
| ILuvSnuffles805 2003-01-27 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh this was so great! It made my heart....I don't know how to say it, but it made me feel .... Oh, I just can't put it into words! Let's just say it affected me somehow. I really loved this! Ranma and Akane are so cute together! I love fics like these! Excellent Job! |
| eXDream2K5 2003-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is so cute! i'm new to the series but i like it already and i love the fanfiction! this is a really good fic! |
| AdvancedGIR 2003-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH MY GOSH!! WOW is the only word that can come to my mind. I can't begin to tell you how good that was. It seems as though you used the perfect verse for each character. It was written so well and leaves the reader with a wonderful satisfied feeling at the end. Keep up the good work! I am totally amazed! And, NO, I am not biased (even though we are kinda related). ^_~ |
| The Weird One 2003-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVE IT! Seriously. It is very good. Don't say it isn't! You are a great authoress! |
| Lipana 2003-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseBad? Are you kidding me?! This is good! |
| butterfly10 2003-01-18 ch 1, | abuseHey! Why do you say it's bad! I actually liked it!!! Is there a song that would make a good part too? ;) i think yu're good at it. And the characters come out quite true to themselves. Keep writing!!! |