i love this story :) its like my favorite ever. i was just wondering if you planned on putting names on the little grey section beneeth the summary so people could search your story.

-.- It's Aragorn, not Aragon.

O.O ...How is it possible for an entire family to be insane?!

-.- I'm pretty sure that all of that ** can be classified as child abuse... As a female, I must say, that such treatment makes me sick. I can sympathize though. My dad got two daughters, and he's as manly as they come. He only has his friends to go hunting with, or to chat about cars and tractors and guns with... Lol, it must get kind of boring, being surrounded by girls. Heck, even our cat is female. But, he's NEVER treated me like THAT.

This sounds simliar to me. When i was little, my parents brought me up like a boy, but once i hit puberty, they suddenly exected me to be a girl. Its hard for me, trying to find the in-between...

I loved it!

Wow, reading the fight scene while Isengard Unleashed from Two Towers soundtrack was in background was really, um... impressive. I mean that part in the song when it goes all crescendo and stuff.

Wow this fic's been an amazing read,
ok i think i may just be really slow but Josh is Aragon?! Woah was not expecting that (might be the fact that it's dreadfuly late and i'm in dire need of sleep but yeah.. it came as a shock)
i can't wait to check out the sequel lookin' forward to the Glory/Jack love and when she meets the fellowship =]

lmfao loved the last part of the chapter,
"These men think they’re elves from Lord of the Rings. I have to get out of here! No bloody well telling what the crazy bastards would do" and
"I was going to fall to my death, or so I would have hoped. Instead I smashed into a branch." lolz ber funny
aww i feel sorry for Jack, i hope things pick up for her.
i'm intrigued, this fic sounds really interesting i can't wait to see how it progresses

Good ideas in this chapter. The situation with Orome completely echoes the situation with Jack's father. This line in particular was very provocative: "Are you telling me that this bastard first claims me like I'm a pet, sets impossible standards for me to follow, and now he's gonna kill me when I fail them?" Dunno if that's what you intended or not, but I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt. ;)

Very nice so far. I'm going to get back to reading now. XD

"Who is your father that gives you that right? George Bush?"
lmao she is very graceful with words isn't she?

aw poor Jack she has a hard knock life. Poor thing but sh is funny as heck lol i like the part where the teacher is all like "That won't help it get done, Jack." when she was hitting her head. I like this story!

Why does Jack remind me of Jack Sparrow?

What? You're just gonna freaking leave it there?!

"hell, I even knew how to play Rugby" sorry, i love your story. don't get me wrong, but I'm female and I play on a gold medal rugby team, our guys team got third, even though our AA leags, (don't know how to spell it) only had three teams last year, hehe. love your story though!!