I enjoyed what you wrote of the sequel. It is too bad that you discontunued it, it was a very good story.

*snifle* good story

more please... sad and angsty but i want to know more about celeste (i gather that celeste would have been her name before she was taken by the guards and put into training for the priestess thingy not sure what it is called).

i am sure that a couple of chapters explaining the rest of the journy to haven and the mind healing of celeste could be done... and the windrider thingy could be that sena and celeste are meant to return to karse and set something right... maybe inspire the female son of the sun or something... cause from elspeth and darkwind i assume that this is set about the time of selenay and i seem to remember the female son of the sun...

Sena:

I see that this has not been updated since 2004. Please, Please, Please, Please, Please (enough begging?) update!

MsChief

write more, i like this story

Your profile says that this particular story is discontinued. I hope it isn't a permanent thing, as this story needs finishing. Please let it be only a temporary thing.

OMG!THIS IS SUCH A GOOD FIC! PLEASE CONTINUE! I LOVE SEAPHIM!

I just started reading Mercedes Lackey Fan Fiction only about a month ago. – Not very long really. Anyway, during the past month, I came to the conclusion that a majority of the writers within this section are a little too immature in their writing styles. (In other words, they are really quite bad.)

But, I liked the books and I still held out hope that there was some Fan Fiction writer out there that could create a plot with believable characters, and had the writing ability to pull it all together. I found that in your first Seraphim story.

Predictably, I immediately moved on to your Seraphim 2. I liked Sera, and I found her relationship with Meriol endearing. You wrote them wonderfully. Sera's simple crush was sweet without the obsessive, stalker, quality that many writers seemed so stuck on.

I had looked forward to reading more, even if I didn't particularly car for Sera's new chosen. I found Celeste a little hard to sympathize with because she had just so much happen to her within her life that it made her out to be almost too good to be true. Whereas, Sera, though a bit of a loner, is understandable. (My favorite) Celeste is just someone that I have to pity, and that makes me not like her.

Anyway, I was disappointed when I skimmed through your profile and found that you had discontinued this story. I don't understand why you stopped writing. So I wrote you, in the hope that maybe I could get you to start again. Though unlikely, I thought I'd give it a shot.

I liked this story, and your Seraphim series held promise. I would have liked to have found out what happened next, but I am sure one person who understands not being able to think up what comes next, or just to busy to bother with any extra writing.

Thank you anyway. I enjoyed what I did read, and maybe I'll be lucky and you'll take an interest in this story once more. – Then again, maybe not. Ah well, a reader could only hope.

Archer

P.S. Should you ever care to write, my e-mail is Z083711@niu.edu

Hey! Its great, keept it up, lol, waitin' for the 5th chapter to come up!

she's not mary sue is she?

aren't Chosen supposed to forget like immediately? until they reach haven? or something.

I read the first part, but I didn't get to review because I saved it to a disc to read. Love it. You need to update soon. I must read more. Very good story plot and charachters. lol, interesting.
Agent Ky, signing off.

Finally some more! *rejoices*
I am glad you plan to finish this, I was afraid it had been abandoned. Such a sad chapter though... poor Celeste/Mia.

*sniffles* Angsty... but really rather well written. Yay! :D
~lagged-of-the-jet-variety-cat

YAY! YOU UPDATED!:D good chapter.. but the POOR PUPPIES!!*sniffle* anyway, I'm glad you managed to hold off the WB Demon. I like this story.More, please!