thank GOD u didnt let reno say anything!

KEWL! She was talking to Rufus *nod nod nod* Yup. It's Rufus alright ) Awesome poem! I loved it!

I think it's Cloud! Nice, sweet poem!

Well, I WOULD say it was sad, but then I read that funny thing at the end and now I'm feeling all weird. Don't worry, that's not a bad thing _

Decent, but I really could have done without the little thing at the end of the poem.

That was pretty good...I would hope the beloved is Sephiroth, or even Cloud. Well, I really enjoy your Aeris/Seph stuff.. Keep up the good work!

The beloved is so obvious Sephiroth...I mean please...though I could go with Rufus because I do have a thing for him as well. This is very good.

That's a fairly long poem for a moment that probably didn't last half as long. Unless you're insinuating she suffered for several moments after she was skewered. In which case, that's pretty sadistic and you shouldn't be rating this G. And anyway, if she was suffering in such a way, she wouldn't have a coherent mind to think of all of that. It would have become "20 years from this moment will youahfdishifhhasdifhasdf whisper my tale, but you might OW OW OW OWWIE ahigdhafdjkasdhg been through." And not that I have a doctor's knowledge, but I'm guessing right about there she would have died. So you might want to edit this or something.