please update. i really love your story.

please continue writng, i love how you started your story, it's so interesting

i like ur ficcy! really! i do :P but... :( i don't know have u can continue it.. and can i point out one lil mistake? u.. uhh... i'm just gonna put this bluntly, not to be rude, but i have no other way to say it. u don't know how to spell a word. it's : ENOUGH : not : ENOPH : ^^ i hate that word.. i used to have a hard time getting it down, heck! even one of my friends spelled it : ANOFF : ! i used to wonder what it was ^^ o well, update soon!

:P

*gasp* you don't have a beta? *faints* it wasn't too bad, not too many mistakes, really. if you can't find anyone better, then i guess i could edit it for you. NOW, on to the REAL review: ::ahem:: WOWIE! cutsie cutsie cutsie! i lack imagination, though, unless it concerns Spirited Away, so i'm not sure what ya should do next. *attempts to think ahead by trips and falls* okay. yeah. sure. so... just do the next chap about her meeting Luna, make a time jump, then USAGIE and Heero? heck, i dunno! =^_^= lol

Make the next chapter a betrayal one. then have them make up in next chater.Try to make the betrayal to hardsh! that is my idea, if you want to use it!

add new chapter

Really good. So is it going to be Usa/heero.

Usagi-I love it! It was good right Ro?
Heero-Hnn.
Usagi-lol. Anyways keep writing and don't pay any attention to Ro.
Heero-Hnn.
Usagi-Baka.

more, its just that simple.

this is great, you DEFINATELY ought to update soon! it's been a really really really long time since i've surfed the SM part of FF.Net (lost cable, haven't ever read the manga, who the heck is this sailor sun everybody's talking about??) but i'm a good follower - besides, i like this. :D i sees potential, yes? yes! so, ya, update soon, ya?

FINDH IT FOR I HAVE JUST CAME FROM HEERO AND HAVE BEEN GIVEN THE MISSION TO KILL YOU IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE IT. PREVIOUSLY KNOWN AS SAILOR MOON 009

Hmm... good start, write more cause i'm curious now.

well, u now have my interest! :D i wanna read it so lemme know when u have an update. and is it usa/hii??? *prays it is* well, g2g so ja for now...

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keep going please you caught my interest and
that not very easy.

i don't think you are doing anything wrong. there was like a past tense verb where it should have been present, but everyone makes mistakes. o and feel free to make the chapters longer. i can't wait for the next chapter of this promising story.