WOW.
I really love how you capture both Fakir and Ahiru's emotions, as they try to find their places again in the world. And how despite the story being over they still try and continue to dance. Just wow, this was beautiful beyond words and so sad, I felt like crying because it had such a bittersweet feel to it.
Great Job!

So cute. (:

Beautifully written :)

Wow. Just wow. This was simply incredible! I loved how Fakir and Ahiru decided to continue dancing even if the story has ended. Something about their stories, one about a duck and the other about a knight, both forgotten, has always caught my interest and delight whenever I see them together.

Aw, that was sweet. The diaoluge could be more wholesome, but besides that, I loved it!

Lemondrop x

Very sweet fic. This is how the story should have ended!

Omg, that was so cute! F/A rules in my opinion, though I feel bad for Ahiru and her relationship with Mytho...

Anyway, that was really sweet. Why couldn't the real thing have ended like this? T_T *Sniffles*

That was a beautifully written one-shot which truly put a smile upon my face. The last line was just perfect and the setting of it all was just what I wanted to read. Simply a duck && a boy who set out to find their own sweet ending

luv it!

awesome

Quite beautiful! I loved it. The metaphors were well done and well-placed. You also got the mood right, and they were very in-character. Sweet, and really fits them. Wonderful! One of my favorites!

Well written, but you nearly had me confused in the beginning, thank goodness you cleared up the fact that the new story was beginning during the dance. I also wondered how Fakir could figure out Duck's thoughts so easily, but than again, he too was thinking along those lines.

One of your stories per day should be my cap, because it breaks my heart each time I read something of yours. But then I find this, and now my heart aches all over again. Damn you for being a better writer than me, but don't you ever stop.
Michelle
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Samuraiko

wonderful. simplistic. sweet. amazing.

AAww, how cute! Congratulations you write wonderful, this is really cute^.^