That was a very good story but I can't help thinking that Neon's a bit OOC in this fic.

please update it's a really good story and I'd love to read more of it

Please write more, about ten of my friends are waiting for more of your are Neon and Kurpicka fans! WRITE MORE

OMG! THAT WAS SOOO GOOD! please write more! u'r so talented! i love this fic!