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| LuckilyCharmedGirl 2003-06-19 ch 4, | abuseI love this story. |
| vicky24 2003-05-27 ch 1, | abusei love it all the chapters it is great |
| Barb6 2003-02-01 ch 12, | abuseExcellent story - very well told! But who will manage the Underworld if Cole goes off to guard the Hollow? And I can't quite imagine Phoebe and Cole playing chess while they guard it - what will happen to them? I love your stories and the intelligence you give your characters. I love Leo as an Elder who has the courage to seek out Cole for help. I love the idea of bring Phoebe back to form new Power of Three. I love the idea of Cole making life so safe for the Halliwell's that they have to be taught about their magic again. Please keep writing your stories! |
| PlasmicFemale 2003-01-31 ch 12, | abuseAwww, would've been cool if we got a glimpse at how it ends up, with them as the guardians. Your story was really good. Hope you keep writing. |
| PlasmicFemale 2003-01-31 ch 11, | abuseThat was excellent. Update soon! |
| Lilian 2003-01-31 ch 12, anon. | abuseSo very good!! What an interesting plot-twist, to have Phoebe and Cole become Guardians of the Hollow. Although I doubt they'll spend their time playing chess like the two previous-previous Guardians did. Or if they'll be doing much 'guardianing' at all, considering they've got eternity to work out their problems and make up for, ahem, lost time. *grin* Loved it. No, seriously. It was just what I needed after this Centennial Charmed crap. This is the Phoebe I love, one who realizes it wasmuch her problem as it was Cole's the fact she was turned Evil. Hope we well hear more from you soon! |
| Tzarista 2003-01-31 ch 12, | abusegreat story it was good to read |
| Mimi 2003-01-31 ch 12, anon. | abuseWOW! To paraphase Phoebe: "All my Charmed obsession, and I didn't see it coming!" What can I say? "Future perfect!" |
| Evil Angel4 2003-01-31 ch 11, | abuseWOW! Another great chapter! Now I wonder... what isn't in its place? Phoebe being alive three centuries after her death or Cole being the Source? I truly hope Phoebe and Cole will end up together! Yes, I know... I'm a dreamer! Please continue! |
| Lilian 2003-01-30 ch 11, anon. | abuseOh no! Now that the Hollow has been recaptured, Cole and Phoebe will have to deal with their baggage of unresolved issues! I sense a fight coming--- please, make it right! Don't let it end like the show: let us believe in the magic of true love!! |
| PrinceCharmed 2003-01-30 ch 11, | abuseWow....Awesome Chapter. Just plain awesome. |
| M14Mouse 2003-01-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseI like! What a great story! Keep up the good work! |
| Evil Angel4 2003-01-29 ch 10, | abuseI loved the way Cole 'played' with them during the training session!so much fun! I could just picture him faking the freeze! Perfect! And for once Phoebe went soft on him! Has the 3 centuries of death had their effects on her? I hope so! Your story is very good! Please continue! |
| Mimi 2003-01-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseWow! Phoebe acknowledging a "Cole action" as unselfish - and it flowed so easily, and so believably, from what the characters did in the story! You're amazing (but then we already established that, right?) |
| Barb6 2003-01-29 ch 10, | abuseAnother wonderful chapter! I love Cole pretending he was frozen - that is hysterical! And I really love how Phoebe is learning to really look at Cole and not through her pre-conceived perceptions. Maybe after 300 years she really can learn something about him afterall. Please keep writing! What happens to them all? |