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LuckilyCharmedGirl
2003-06-19
ch 4,
abuseI love this story.
vicky24
2003-05-27
ch 1,
abusei love it all the chapters it is great
Barb6
2003-02-01
ch 12,
abuseExcellent story - very well told! But who will manage the Underworld if Cole goes off to guard the Hollow? And I can't quite imagine Phoebe and Cole playing chess while they guard it - what will happen to them? I love your stories and the intelligence you give your characters. I love Leo as an Elder who has the courage to seek out Cole for help. I love the idea of bring Phoebe back to form new Power of Three. I love the idea of Cole making life so safe for the Halliwell's that they have to be taught about their magic again. Please keep writing your stories!
PlasmicFemale
2003-01-31
ch 12,
abuseAwww, would've been cool if we got a glimpse at how it ends up, with them as the guardians. Your story was really good. Hope you keep writing.
PlasmicFemale
2003-01-31
ch 11,
abuseThat was excellent. Update soon!
Lilian
2003-01-31
ch 12, anon.
abuseSo very good!! What an interesting plot-twist, to have Phoebe and Cole become Guardians of the Hollow. Although I doubt they'll spend their time playing chess like the two previous-previous Guardians did. Or if they'll be doing much 'guardianing' at all, considering they've got eternity to work out their problems and make up for, ahem, lost time. *grin*

Loved it. No, seriously. It was just what I needed after this Centennial Charmed crap. This is the Phoebe I love, one who realizes it wasmuch her problem as it was Cole's the fact she was turned Evil.

Hope we well hear more from you soon!
Tzarista
2003-01-31
ch 12,
abusegreat story
it was good to read
Mimi
2003-01-31
ch 12, anon.
abuseWOW! To paraphase Phoebe: "All my Charmed obsession, and I didn't see it coming!" What can I say? "Future perfect!"
Evil Angel4
2003-01-31
ch 11,
abuseWOW! Another great chapter!
Now I wonder... what isn't in its place? Phoebe being alive three centuries after her death or Cole being the Source?
I truly hope Phoebe and Cole will end up together! Yes, I know... I'm a dreamer!
Please continue!
Lilian
2003-01-30
ch 11, anon.
abuseOh no! Now that the Hollow has been recaptured, Cole and Phoebe will have to deal with their baggage of unresolved issues! I sense a fight coming--- please, make it right! Don't let it end like the show: let us believe in the magic of true love!!
PrinceCharmed
2003-01-30
ch 11,
abuseWow....Awesome Chapter. Just plain awesome.
M14Mouse
2003-01-29
ch 10, anon.
abuseI like! What a great story! Keep up the good work!
Evil Angel4
2003-01-29
ch 10,
abuseI loved the way Cole 'played' with them during the training session!so much fun! I could just picture him faking the freeze! Perfect!
And for once Phoebe went soft on him! Has the 3 centuries of death had their effects on her? I hope so! Your story is very good! Please continue!
Mimi
2003-01-29
ch 10, anon.
abuseWow! Phoebe acknowledging a "Cole action" as unselfish - and it flowed so easily, and so believably, from what the characters did in the story! You're amazing (but then we already established that, right?)
Barb6
2003-01-29
ch 10,
abuseAnother wonderful chapter! I love Cole pretending he was frozen - that is hysterical! And I really love how Phoebe is learning to really look at Cole and not through her pre-conceived perceptions. Maybe after 300 years she really can learn something about him afterall. Please keep writing! What happens to them all?
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