Nice job! I like the first person...and I know he doesn't die in the book, as it says in mine. your fic is nice, flowing...good job!

Great Job! I haven't really seen anyone write about Haldir's par tin the battle at Helm's Deep and thought it was pretty cool to finally see one! Not only that, but you wrote it in a great Tolkien fashion with good description and weaving words! Fabulous Job!