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anonymous 2007-06-13 ch 18, anon.	abusewow this is very good...
Alayea 2006-07-17 ch 18, anon.	abuseUgh... looks like my previous review got some of its wording removed. It should say "currently unhappy with My apologies.
Alayea 2006-07-16 ch 18, anon.	abuseA resurging interest in Golden Sun brought me back to this old fanfic of yours. Come Friday (7/21), it'll have been two years since the last update... time sure flew by. But despite its passage, "A World Apart" still retains a certain state of quality that all fanfiction writers have (or should have) a desire to attain. While I am of the understanding that you, Griffinkhan, are currently unhappy with I would ask you to not let that keep you from concluding this story someday. If such a request cannot be fulfilled, it is alright. That's just the way things go sometimes. Just thought that I should speak up and express my appreciation. 'Bye for now.
Critic of Constructiveness 2006-04-11 ch 18,	abuseFor some reason, I can't see Alex using contractions... You did a good job with this chapter in moving the storyline along without making it feel rushed or sloppily done. The scene with Isaac and Ivan was a little choppy, though. Now update, or I'll set my non-existant muse of doom on you!
Ani Medley 2005-12-27 ch 18,	abuseMe: (froths at the mouth) Granite: Uh, Omniflyer...quit dawdling. Ani's looking not too happy right now. O_o Me: YEAH! Come on, make me think on what I should put in RoD! I hate not being able to know! (Lories walks in...or more likely, storms in) Me: O_o What are YOU doing here?! You're not a muse! Lories: (censored version) Aren't you going to finish the story you knocked me into?! We're WAITING! Me: Later! No spamming the review! Lories: (curses very eloquently) Me: (whistles) (Garet and Picard walk in and physically drag Lories out) Me: (grins) Good story! NOW FINISH IT, OR I'LL SWEAR I'LL GET A FRYING PAN AND DEFENESTRATE YOU OFF THE EIFFEL TOWER! (froths again) Granite: I'm so sorry, but things may be said in impulse if this continues. (pulls something) ~ZAP~
Kiiro-chan 2005-10-11 ch 18,	abuseHmm... I read this story AGES ago, I come back to check if has been updated yet (like, a year) and STILL nothing! :( Please update. But I almost forgot what it was all about! (hehe)
The Appreciator 2005-08-06 ch 18, anon.	abuseSo I’ve read jedigrl2001’s Through the Other Eyes, Midnight C’s Romance Saga, Kyarorain’s Vision, and now this… What is it about a handheld role-playing game that convinces young women to craft such masterworks in the annals of fanfiction!? I swear, you all give me a truly hard time keeping my jaw from dropping onto the floor. Now I gotta hammer nails into my jaw to achieve that purpose whenever I read each of your latest chapters! As for this fic, what I love most about it is the insertion of genuinely funny humor into the scenes. I’d say this helps an already great fanfic to be good enough to work as a movie…
re weird 2005-01-24 ch 18,	abuseAh...I love this story. I stopped reading it a while ago and I'm glad I read it all over again, as there are new chapters and it keeps on getting better. I really like this. It has so much detail, like with the story fitting perfectly with the games. I'm also looking foward to finding out who the mysterious three voices are. (No ,I didn't forget them!)
High King Isaac 2004-12-09 ch 18,	abuseHere's hoping for unkind fate!! ^_^
Wise One 89 2004-10-29 ch 12, anon.	abuseYOU ARE THE MOST EVIL PERSON IN THE HISTORY OF THE WORLD! I HOPE SHEBA FRIES YOU TO A CRISP !
Mikaa 2004-08-31 ch 3,	abuseI should probably note that the reason I started reading this was because I noticed that the summary was kin to my "Parallels." Then I noticed the date and I was curious. \| I have not read much, as I do not like to read fics online these days, but geez, this is worth the time. Not many fics these days reach out and grab me, yet this one did a great job. \| I hope to have hard copies of this in the near future (I prefer to read printed copies of stories rather than on the PC) and will try to review more later. \| I only hope this is continued. Thus far, this is insanely great. \| MIKAA
Morncreek 2004-08-19 ch 18,	abuse>:( loads a crossbow takes aim DIE!!...c*p. Missed 'im. \| Alex: Nyah! :P teleports away for good* \| I'll get him. I will! \| Everybody else: O_O! slowly back away from Morncreek \| still enraged, but gets control of it Well-written chapter! ^_^ Now, to get back to Alex-hunting.
Johndude 2004-08-03 ch 18,	abuseOh fate better be unkind, if it's olny two more chapters, well i...can't think of anything horrible enough right now, but you get the picture...
Incrediblecuznz 2004-08-01 ch 18,	abuseYay!! Update ^_^ So happy ^^ So cool! ^^ But poor Dylan :( So sad. But such a great story!! I love this story and I hope to see it updated PRONTO!! I'm gonna die of utter suspense in the meantime. >< I gotta know what's gonna happen to poor Dylan and what's up with Isaac and Ivan's freakish "otherworld." So update soon please? Please?! ^^
Jupiter Sprite 2004-07-31 ch 18,	abuseYeah, I was very mad about the loss of the emoticons, too. But at least they show up in reviews. ^_^ So now I can use them to express how happy ^_^ I am that you updated! ^_^ - I'm glad that what Hama said isn't the absolute truth. It would have been rather disappointing. Are you still planning to kill off a main character? T_T Who knows what you're plotting... - So Alex is working for evil King Isaac, huh? I still think breaking out of the other world has something to do with bringing our evil little friend back to his senses. If that's at all possible. - And maybe I'm just an overly sensitive FBM, but that scene with Ivan at the beginning nearly made me cry! T_T - Keep up the good work! Your updates are worth waiting for. ^_^

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