Loved this story! I always wished that they had given us a little more info about the tattoo. I want that tattoo. :) The amount of details in this story make it very real!

Dragon of the Elements

This is an awesome story! Not at all what I expected (and I mean that in a good way.) It's definitely a cool idea. Keep up the good work!

Lovely story! Well written and well described. My only suggestion would be to add a bit about Rick dealing with his parent's deaths, that part seemed a bit glossed over. Other than that, the little details (like the history of the orphanage) made this feel very real. Excellent, I hope to see more from you. -M

This was very nice - short and sweet and to the point. You didn't drag it out, which was very good. Keep writing!

It's O'Connell.

I enjoyed this fic alot, it was well written and I particularly liked the way you wrote young Rick- very believable. I hope to read more from you soon.

Much love,

Mexx