wow..this story was amazing! you are a very good writer!

wow that is such an amazing fan fic. i was crying!! I was CRYING!! beautiful! absolutely sensational!! well done keep up the good work...wow!

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I loved it!

A reviewer on my current WIP mentioned this story as one I should look at as an excellent example of sustained Ron POV, and I'm glad she did. Ron's not a major character in the story I'm writing (leaves early on), and I mentioned part of that was because I didn't think I could maintain his unique voice througha longer work. This is a fantastic story; well written and capturing the two main characters wonderfully well. The only criticism I have is that the flashbacks are not demarcated clearly enough-- I'd use the horozontal line in the editor to show where those start and end. You may have had some line breaks in the original but ff net is funnay about stripping them out. Otherwise, really well done. Thanks for sharing this.

Wow, amazingly well written and in character! And very creative too, BRAVO! I loved reading it!
Just one thing: Ron says he's got Harry's cloak covering them, but how does Severus know Harry has an Invisibility Cloak? :P
I hope you write more!

Lovely story.

Stunning story, I really enjoyed reading it. The emotion displayed in the piece is wonderful as well. I do feel that it ended rather abruptly but I like how you wrapped everything up. Lovely job!

hehe. cool one :)) Thank you.

I liked it, It was cute!! U should write a sequel!!

A great oneshot I really liked it:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

Bye for now:)

I found this story most enjoyable, and your grammar most excellent. Good work!

Very nice story and well executed.

hey hey hey that was awsome..lol...tears sneaky lil old man..see yha

This is quite an incredible story! It holds a great storyline and you executed all the uneasy parts (the softer side to Snape, Ron helping out with the whole undressing thing, which I must say was very interesting!) greatly! It was a real enjoyable read, it's that good I reviewed it. I NEVER review - you're my first! Keep up the good work!

love this story