I fixed some errors I saw in the story, but as for cursing...I have no idea, there is no cursing!

I was expecting this to have a little more plot. But, it did endeup being a rather nice glimpse of the typical night for Spidey (usually these kinds of stories are his typical day). I've never liked Shocker much, as I felt he was simply a "my power is this" character without the depth that characters like Mr. Freeze can have - but this story was so ridiculously well-written that it wouldn't have been any different if the Lizard were the villain of choice. (Every time cursing was used, it wasn't needed, though.) Three minor nitpicks: Spider-Man is spelled with a - and uppercase M, there's nothing wrong with get-rich-quick schemes as implied in the beginning (I sure hope not, anyway, for the sake of my soul!), and the Uncle Ben quote was unneeded.

that was good. i like it