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| sweetbabby33 2006-06-26 ch 31,  | abuseLove it,hope to hear fron you soon~~!! n_~ |
| Arrna 2005-01-20 ch 31, | abuseArgh! How could you?! Such a cliff hanger! When's the sequel? Please tell me you have a sequel! I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
| Arrna 2005-01-19 ch 12, | abuseLoving the story so far, just one question...who the heck is Nancy? If youre refering to Toby's mother, her name was Karen...just a heads up ^_^ Keep up the good work |
| musicgirl141 2004-02-01 ch 31, | abuseI love it, even if you are being evil by making everyone wait for the sequel. You haven't updated in some time. I sincerely hope that you haven't stopped writing, as it would be a travesty for this story sequence to remain unfinished. I liked the whole basis of the split in personalities, and in shadows. Throughout this work, there are little lines thrat just reach out and one thinks, yes, that line is absolutely perfect. One thing I noticed is that you rather consistantly spelled 'naive' wrong. You may or may not wish to fix that. Other than that, I greatly enjoyed it, and hope you recieve much more feedback than you have currently received. |
| Miaka 2004-01-30 ch 24, | abuseHey, Judith! I got your e-mail. I'm happy you're going to be making a Labyrinth IV. I'm also glad that you e-mailed me 'cause I hadn't been to FFnet for a while and when I got your message, I remembered that I had never gotten a chance to finish your story.. so, that's what I'm doing now. Poor Hoggle... and Sarah's not there to make him feel better! *sniff* I like how Sarah also had a dark half of herself that she broke free from-it's another thing that connects her to Jareth now. And Leah was very funny in this chapter! LoL :) Nicely done. |
| Angel Barton 2003-07-09 ch 31, | abuseWow, definitly an amazing story! Please please please write the sequal (there is a sequal, right?!), because the Jim Henson ending to this story left me quite, umm, lost and confused. Please write more soon! |
| Queen's Own Fool 2003-07-03 ch 31, | abuseI really liked this story as well. Once again I spent all day reading it. But, unfortunately, I am totally lost about the ending. What happened to everything, and why is Leah at the Jim Henson Company? Are you going to make a third story to wrap it all up? Because, I'm afraid I've been quite left in the dark... |
| brownbear 2003-04-19 ch 31, | abusewow!! good story! sorry i didn't review earlier, but i just couldn't stop reading!! i like how you explained why jareth was so mean, instead of him just changing. that probably wouldn't happen. can't wait to find out what happens! :) A.I.W |
| Dulcinea 2003-02-12 ch 31, | abuseweird... so, you're gonna make a 3d story then? cant wait to read it. i really loved this one and the first one. you're very talented. sorry i havent been reviewing... i really have no excuses for it. but hey, i'm doing it now, right? till next we meet |
| Silver Space 2003-01-31 ch 23, | abuseHmm looks like fate is playing games. Keep up the wonderful work. |
| Silver Space 2003-01-29 ch 21, | abuseoh wow. great chapter keep up the excelent work. |
| Silver Space 2003-01-26 ch 18, | abusekeep up the great work on this it is a wonderful story. |
| Dulcinea 2003-01-24 ch 14, | abuseeep. poor jareth!!!! lol. sarah is kinda being a brat, but, yeah understandable, if i were in her position, i dont know what i would have done... pobably either jump for joy and start kissing 'im, or, start yelling and screaming! anyhow. this is really a great story! i dont know why it hasnt got more reviews!!! please, oh please update soon! i cant wait!! and i dont like this new king dude... it took me a long time to put everything together that concerns him, what he's after, how he's connected to certain things... by no means was my... er... stupidity? your fault... i think i'm just getting slow in the brain. anyhow, MORE!!!!!!! |
| Miaka 2003-01-22 ch 9, | abuseYay! Sage is such a good friend. One of the things I love about your writing is how -ALL- of the main characters have developed so that they've become easier to identify with. :D None of that flat personality crap. Great work! |
| Miaka 2003-01-22 ch 6, | abuseYay! Twin reunion. :D And Jareth! Wow, he's sweet. |