I am loveing this story so far...i really like how you made Dawn blind, but that it really doesn't effect her...as for Raoul, lol i never loved him anyways, the wife beater...although i am a sucker for guys with long hair, and in the movie i found him really attractive...lol sorry, got a little carried away...anyways great story so far...love your work.

Your fellow reader and author,

-FFAMasquerade2005

I totally agree with PBunny! I hope you haven't given up on this story since the virus (or vir-ASS as I like to call them) hit your computer, because this is wonderful, and I'd hate to just be left hanging for... forever! Please, please, PLEASE continue! D

-Katy, your faithful reader

Please, please, please, please! continue with this story. It is very unfortunate that you had a virus, but that was NINE MONTHS AGO! This story is very good, and it is EVIL to leave us hanging. Who is Dawn really? Will the trap that is laid for Erik succeed? Will the opera go on as planned? Will Erik and Christine live happily ever after? I must know! The story is very well written with great graphics and descriptions. I also liked how you changed some of the musical's dialogues to fit your characters' circumstances. And thank gosh you do not have a problem with grammar and spelling. But please, write... I eagerly await your update. Remember, you did sign your note "Your most FAITHFUL author." :)

NO, update soon, i really wanna know what is going to happen in the rest of it PLEASE!

Wow I love this i hope you continue!

hey..

..i love the whole "make the readers review..OR ELSE" thing.. it got me reviewing, anyway. ;\ i usually do. thanks for a great story, and keep it up.. i like the sudden force in christine's nature that shows up. to be honest, (which i am), i never really liked christine because she was such a helpless little baby. very helpless. but now she's a bit more...*scratches head* self-sufficient...in a scene or two, so it's a little nicer. i keep thinking of Bjork's song "Army of Me" hehe.. thankee for a good fic...

..:rav:..

I absolutely love your story. Please continue it, I beg You.

Your fan,

GRACE

I like this phanfic! I know how you feel about the computer. Mine crashed a couple weeks ago and my fanfic was lost, along with all my other unposted work. But now I have a spiffy new one! Yay!

Anyway, like I said before, this is a great phanfic.

Great phanfic, but you may want to go back and revise. There are a few parts where you switch tenses and points of view.

Also, Dawn is a bit all-knowing, but who cares? She's awesome! ;-)

Librarian of the Deep

Aw damn. My computer's done that before which is now why I don't save on it anymore, everything goes right to a disk. But that has got to SUCK majorly and I know it's very discouraging. I really enjoy this story thogh so I hope you remember soon because I would like to read more. Good luck, and chin up!

that's terrible! I'm sorry you have to rewrite your chapters. For me that can be a good thing, though, because rewriting makes my chapters better. God, I havn't touched my stories for over a year! *cries for them* I hope things turn out alright. Post as soon as you can!

I've been following your story for a couple of weeks, and have really enjoyed it. I wish you the best of luck in remembering your story. You've done a great job with the characters. I especially love your portrayal of Erik...

Oh dear. I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you can remember it - I really do love this story. That's so hard, when you lose something completely. I will pray for you!

You know, It is against rules to use a chapter as a author's note. I won't report you though - in case this is deleted! Why don't you just read your story off the site? Anyhow, continue, or I will blow up and leave a rather disturbing mess on the ground.

I enjoyed reading you story. I like it how you made Raoul out to be the bad guy of the story. I like the new twist on a old story. I hope that you are able to rememeber the rest of the story, because you have me compleatly hooked on your story. I also like Erik. Why shouldn't he have a happy ending with Christine.
Nicole