Hiro: Ehm...how come Ryou has a wings? Is he an angel or what? (Of course he is, but just in my little twisted morbid dreams, right? Guess not...-.-')
And Sesha is such a sweet little girl...sweet like...uhm...
Kurachu: ..tomato?
Hiro: Yeah, she's sweet like tomato! She's a little sweet tomato! ^_^

*sits there with a very confused look on her face* Huh? Is Malik dead or not? I can't tell. Anyway that was good. Now excuse I have to go watch a show.

yayayayayaya!
yaio! please update soon! please please please please please!

-Kura-chan

wah! malik! ryou! oh hell with it! wah!

no... no... he cant die... its realy good... but how about... the rod is protecting him or somthing... i dont kknow... resect him or somthing... he cant die...no!

this is a pitiful excuse for yaoi. if you are going to write it, just write it!

indeed...
*fic sinks in*
ah! YOU KILLED MALIK! I SHOULD SICK RA ON YOU!

oh that was just so touching! *sniffles*

Case:HELLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Chase:You have had way to much sugar.

Case:Whatever.I can't believe you made Ryou&Malik gay!Oh well, it's still great!

Chase:Yeah,yeah.So you made me cry!

Case:PLEASE keep writing!

EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL

EVIL!!! Why you let him die.EVIL PERSON. Hope he lives!

THis is a really good fic, but I think adding that part at the end with Ryou having wings kind of took away from it.

Case:Th-that w-w-was s-sad!*sniff,sniff*
Chase(my yami):I*sniff*I agree!
(both embrace and cry louder)
Case:I can't believe that blonde,Egyptian hottie died!!*sniff*Keep writing!

Oh wow. That was so sad. Please let there be at least a sequel.

You sparked my intrest. I hope you continue soon I can't wait for the next chapter.