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| MercuryMoon 2003-07-25 ch 6, | abuseSo sweet! Nuriko and Hotohori do make a cute pair. I love your wording and vocab. Please update! :) |
| Brennend 2003-04-22 ch 6, | abuseok so, it's a cool new prolouge, but I'd be much happier with the next chapter instead. |
| shadow priestess 2003-04-21 ch 6, | abuseI love it! It's great and I wish I'd gotten around to reading it earlier. I love your descriptions; they're really nice. I think this deserves more reviews... *sigh* Oh well. I find this a really interesting plotline, what with the PROLOGUE being Miaka's execution... (Actually I was kinda hoping she'd be dead; I was never very fond of her.) Still, great fic, and I hope you update it soon! |
| Lillian 2003-04-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseThree words: This. Is. Brilliant. i have said this before and i'll say it again. Krysanthe, you are a fantastic writer! I don't know really what else to say because i can't find the proper words except that you BETTER UPDATE SOON OR ELSE! just one thing bugging me: is this still a Miaka/Tamahome? I know, i know i'm being annoying and that half the FY fic writers probably cringe or seethe on seeing my name in their reviews but it's just that i'm just really looking for a decent Miaka/Tamahome(Taka) multi chapter story as i have only found barely any and the ones i find it's a love triangle and more often then not Tamahome/Taka does not get Miaka. well i guess it's what i get for being a canon fan. But i wouldn't change because Miaka/Tamhome(Taka) are favourite couple in the whole anime world! and i adore the both of them! Tamahome/Taka beats Miaka by a bit due to the fact i love him so much! and i get a bit put off when i read fics thinking they're a Tamahome/Miaka and it's not and Miaka dumps Tamahome and stuff like that and that just plain ** me off because Miaka is written to be so mean to my Tama-chan! or Tamahome or Taka is written to be an **! anyway i'm so sorry about my rant but i just needed to get it off my chest because i'm currently am reviewing on very little sleep and have read fics that i know i shouldn't have but it was just so tempting to find out why people think any guy other then Taka/Tamahome is so much better for Miaka. By the way is Kourin Nuriko or actually Kourin herself? and in the introdutory chapter who is the nobleman and the killer? I have figured out the princess, prince and emperor. Well i gotta go and again i aplogise if my rant annoyed you in anway or something like that. (Lillian grins sheepishly) Can't wait for the next chapter! You are a excellent author! ( and no i'm not trying to suck up or anything in case anyone sees it that way!) (Wow this has to be my longest review ever! i would apologise again but now i'm being just plain irritating and i'm trying not to do that but something tells me i have no hope! I'm doomed to be annoying reveiwer to most!1 (Lillian runs off crying) |
| MercuryMoon 2003-04-20 ch 3, | abuseOk, I don't have time to read all this yet, but I like your intro. It captures the reader's attention. Not that many intros do that. And yours is going to have most of the 28 seishi? So is my fic! Except my plot is a lot different. It won't have any mikos. And Phoenix Princess. Interesting name for Miaka. It makes sense, too. Great job on your fic! :) |
| Lillian 2003-02-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseAnother chappie!!!! (Haven't you noticed that i love using exclamation marks?) No Miaka or Tama but it's got Nuriko!!!!!!! I love Nuriko!!!!! I wonder what happened? Will she die? (Lillian gets smacked on the head. "Lillian no baka!!!" I love all the seishi but Tamahome and Nuriko win hands down. My fav in the favourite to least favourite order. TAMAHOME!!!!! (I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS GUY!) Miaka and Nuriko!!!! Tasuki and Chichri!!! Hotohori!! Mistsukake and Chriko! |
| Lillian 2003-02-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseYay!!!!!!! New chapter!!!!!!!! I loved the exchange between Tasuki and Miaka! It was so sweet!!!!!!!!!! What's happened to Miaka? I need to know!!!! Update soon!!!!!!! |
| Brennend 2003-02-04 ch 5, | abuseso it seems some group is attack the Royal Family... though I wonder why Nuriko had a dagger in her(?) robes. I'm really intrigued by the whole Lady Kourin/Nuriko situation even though it isn't totally clear yet. I also like how the author incorperated the real life Mongol/Chinese animosity into the story. I'm definetly looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Brennend 2003-02-04 ch 4, | abuseGenrou as a Prince... I'd REALLY like a picture of him all dressed up... and even as a Prince he still seems in character. Now I really want to know what is going on with Kourin (who might be Nuriko and maybe male) and Hotohori. |
| Brennend 2003-02-04 ch 3, | abuseGenrou as a Prince... I'd like a picture of that... and even as a Prince he still seems in character. Now I really want to know what is going on with Kourin (who might be Nuriko and maybe male) and Hotohori. |
| Brennend 2003-02-04 ch 2, | abuseI love all the detail the author puts into this story. Weather its made up or historical or a combination of both it adds a richness to the tale. Tamahome appears... kinda... maybe... eh, who cares it was cool! |
| Anonymous 2003-02-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseThank you! Anyways, I know that I said that the other one was sappy, but I couldn't help it but like THIS one. Mainly bacause I just happen to REALLY like Nuriko/Hotohori pairings. Oh well, this story is really coming along nicely though. Please continue with this story. I really want to see wht happens to Nuriko. Are they going to find out that Nuriko's a guy? Oh wait. IS Nuriko a guy? I forgot. oh well. Please update the next chapter as soon as possible! This is the ONLY Fushigi Yuugi fanfic that I read anymore much cause all the other ones take too long to update and the new ones aren't very good. Mainly because they are usually only a few hundred words long or around a thousand. |
| Anonymous 2003-02-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseThank you! Anyways, I know that I said that the other one was sappy, but I couldn't help it but like THIS one. Mainly bacause I just happen to REALLY like Nuriko/Hotohori pairings. Oh well, this story is really coming along nicely though. Please continue with this story. I really want to see wht happens to Nuriko. Are they going to find out that Nuriko's a guy? Oh wait. IS Nuriko a guy? I forgot. oh well. Please update the next chapter as soon as possible! This is the ONLY Fushigi Yuugi fanfic that I read anymore much cause all the other ones take too long to update and the new ones aren't very good. Mainly because they are usually only a few hundred words long or around a thosand. |
| Brennend 2003-02-04 ch 1, | abuseOooo... this looks like a REALLY neat AU! I wonder what Miaka does as the Jade Princess? And what is Kourin (Nuriko?) up to? |
| KittyLynne 2003-02-04 ch 5, | abuseWow! This was a powerful chapter. So much emotion...and then the murder attempt! Ack! So now Nuriko has revealed herself...(himself?) and is grievously wounded too. *sniffles* I am wondering what Hotohori will think now that he knows who she really is ... And Miaka is poisoned then too? I take it she was hit with the same kind of dagger fired at Hotohori? O_O I didn't think these chapters were sappy, btw...dramatic and emotional, yes, sappy no. ~_^ I also found it really interesting and clever that you used the real life animosity between the Mongols and Chinese as the basis of the Imperial Court's prejuidices against Nuriko. Very nicely done.:) I will be on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter to see what happens to Nuriko and Miaka! Please update soon! ^___^ Warm wishes, KittyLynne:) |