I have been reading your stories for a while now, and here is another that i would like to see continue. Even as unlikely as that is. Of course, i would also like to see ALL of your stories located at one web site so i could read them all...

I hope you plan on continuing this. I want to see a mage cast "Alphonse' Wondrous Wedgie"!

More of this story PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!

The last time I looked at this, it was *much* shorter! Nice to see it expanded the way it has been. I really hope that you're planning to do more of this story. Hmmm... everyone is in Aramar, eh? That means that some of them are going to change, while others gain special abilities which usually only work in that setting, right? I wonder if Ranma (son of Zeus) would be effected at all (by some pantheon rules, he would count as a demi-god). Minako apparently slaughtered a group of evil creatures in a berserker frenzy out of a desire to protect her friends, so Delphinus Amazon seems to be a likely change in her case (possibly for Ami as well, but she might yet focus on something else). Nabiki has had the unique experience of witnessing someone (Usagi) being utterly selfless in an attempt to save her (even if it did fail), then had the horrible luck to run into what appears to be evil minded rebels who make her old self (at the time in the story) seem friendly and altruistic. She is, of course, in a lot of trouble. Whether she comes out of this with a better attitude towards people and how she should act, or if the whole experience just turns her bitter and accelerates her corruption is yet to be seen...

Hey it looks llie you have made some changes since the first draft.

Ha ha ha ha ha ! very amusing story!

this was great

O_O Akane...magnet of Console RPG villans...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! Hmmm...I see you switched out El-hazard with your campaign world Aramar... THis should proove intersting...and how DOES a Half-god react to the RUles? *although considering how the girls look at him I suspect soemhting along hte lines of a mega playboy.*

yeahhhhh another treak into Aramar _

What happend to the other chapters?

If your having problems with the different versions of stories, stop replacing them and put them all out like how "rune with a view 2" was done over in studio aesir

Nice, nice...

It's strange, but this Genma trying to kill Ranma is quite a bit nicer than usually.

(well, at least compared to the ones in your fics.)

El-hazard works OK, though so would Lodoss...

Sugg. Power for Akane:Immortality in the form of (really suped up) regeneration;

that way you can have her go splat again and again. Nabiki as Nanami is somewhat

predictable, though I suppose you'll come up with some kind of twist to

the plot. Ranma is powerful enough as-is, though maybe he could get a power that

is more hindrance than help... Getting the Saotome MA learning factor maxed out

(thus becoming even more powerful -more likely to break things accidentally, at

least in his own mind), mistaken for a Demon-God? Suspicions, suspicions.

Is this a pre- or post-Mizuhara El Hazard? Doesn't necessarily have to

be even the same century they appeared there. Decisions, decisions...

anyway, thought to throw my thoughts to thee.

I like this one so far. (G) Are you making Genma into Jinnai? (Laughs) Be interesting to see how Soun and Akane fit in.

Poor Nabiki, though - looks like she just got enslaved. Yipes.

Hmm, Ami - Hysterical strength or El-Hazard powerup? (G) Only time will tell.

I wonder where the other girls are? (shrug) I'll just have to keep reading, I guess.

(blinks) Lodoss war? Doesn't fit the 'Ranma' genre at all, too grim! I like it better in the Magnificent World. More fun here!

Bai Bai! (G)

good start with keeping it inline with the story. looking foward towards your next chapter of ranma and el hazard

I like this storyline quite a bit better than the Pokegirls one. It just has more of a "Ranma" feel, I guess. *shrugs* Oh, well. Just my take on it.

Ja Ne!