Aw that's a sweet ending. I love it! You're a really good writer, and I look forward to reading the rest of your one-shot fics.

WOOT!! Again, loving it, loving it, I think I'll go ahead and read all your HP stories now lol. Yay!! Thou has rescued me from my utter boredom and bore me away to the land of HHr. :D Huzzah!!

Rock on mate,

!Raine!

You're a first time writer!? That's insane! The story was awesome! Definetly one of my favorites on this site! Really great job!

i like it...alot

Ohh, so sweet! It's absolutely fluffy. did that really happen? I look forward to (if there's anymore) the sequel.

Lils

oooohh this is sooo good to be true!! i TOTALLY LOVE IT!!! this is surely going into my faves!!

Pretty darn good for a 'first-time writer.' Well-written, grammatically correct, nice plot, and short and to the point. Best of all, romantic and h/h! kudos! :)

That was great:)

thefly

That was beautiful. Your closing line was superb, really. My only comment on the -ve column would be that I personally find that A/Ns midway through the story break up the flow, and it was such a beautiful story that is was a shame.
Excellent work.

You aren't going to stop there are you? PLZ DON"T!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!

You aren't going to stop there are you? PLZ DON"T!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!

Hehehehehe! ^_^

Cute!

Cheers!

awwwwwwwwww
that is soooooooo cute! ;)

That was so sweet; I loved it. I especially loved the eding because you found a whole new inventive way to say they kissed. That was great!

hey i really like

now how much was this like ur own experience

haha just kidding