I HATE YOU YOUR A TERRIBLE PERSON AND...AND...*sniff*...im crying.

ohmygosh! u made me cry for the first time in 3 weeks! lovely story! keep it up! aw!_

aww man im crying, ive read thise story atleat 4 times and everytime i always cry, that had to of been the saddest thing ive ever read, beautifuly written, (crap i can't stop the tears) dammit dammit dammit im still crying

Like Ash said... Why did Misty have to die?

Oh my goodness - I'm crying. I really am. In the middle of the day. That is anot your regular occurence.
There is one word to sum this up (sniffs)
Wow.
But why do people like to kill Misty so much?

Wow...is this an unexpected review or what? I realize you wrote this fic about 3 years ago and probably forgot all about it and really don't expect to hear any more feedback on it. THINK AGAIN! I was searching for a quality AAML...just felt like reading one cause I hadn't in so long...and I found this! And I have to say, it was the good fic I was looking for. So I decided it was worthy of a review, even though it's probably been collecting dust for awhile.

It was so touching and sad...I especially liked the beginning part with Misty. You did a wonderful job expressing the characters' emotions. Granted, there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors...maybe you should consider getting a beta-reader for future fics. Just a friendly suggestion-not a criticism! Anyways I really loved the fic and if you haven't written any more AAMLs yet...you should!

-Fade-

*sniff* That;s so sad! WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THAT!

I..I.. God, Im crying, i need a tissue!

I can't stand it, Im crying and Im not a sensitive person, I never cry! So so sad..

why? why did she die? that should be rated TSTR,

for too sad to read! WA! you are a great author and all.. But Forever has to be the saddest thing in the world! Im going to read your sequal now! I hope I dont flood the world, like I flooded my liviing room...thanks for writing such a great story, God has gifted you greatly...

Amazing. Lizzy is trying not to cry amd wiping her nose. She rarle cries, but this is 2 stories in a row! lots of spelling and grammer problems. you should not have had that las comment at the end, it kinda ruined it... she is too upset to type, so i took over. Come on, Lizzy, lets go upstairs, now. PUT THE PEN DOWN! HEY! YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO DO THAT! Gotta go, she found a pen, and is now chasing her brother around, trying to write on his ass! I gotta stop her, afore she hurts some one. *Sighs* Bugging Robbie always makes her happy...

Hi, I hear that English is not your first language... Maybe you should get someone to iron out the mistakes you are making in your writing, just for your sake to minimise the flaming. Getting those things out of the way really helps significantly; a story with few mistakes is enough to satisfy all but the most critical of readers.

The only other problem I have with this story is the last paragraph. Its huge, and needs to be split into several places to be more readable and hence more dramatic. Overall, good work on the AAMR. I could of course say that both Ash and Misty are really OOC, but...

Ooh... different from any AAMR I have ever seen. This was very sad and well-written... I hope you do more AAMR fics! _

WAH! ::Sniff, cry, blows nose:: That was soooooo sad. Sweet ending though.

That was sad *sniff* but I liked it! Good job!

Wow...This is such a great story. Beautifully written.

That was too awesome! Beautiful, and sad. I've never read an AAML quite like this before. Great job, you should DEFINITELY write more like this!