I love the idea of a personified Death, and I've always thought it and Harry should be on a first-name basis. I liked the explanation of why Harry didn't remember/live the warped memories; it seemed to fit very well. Please update soon!

This is really good! I love the personification of Thanatos as Mateo, and maybe if Harry manages to finish his task Thanatos will also give Harry the memory of those years. Really good work so far - the symbolism is amazing. I just wish we could read this in English rather than Lord of the Flies! Please, finish this story! I want to see Death of Air, and hopefully Death of Avada Kedavra! Keep up the good work, and finish your stories! They're wonderful, and I can't wait to read the rest of them. Please, update again!

i wish you would update, it was an interesting story!

Wow.. very nicely done so far. It's...odd, not the sort of thing I've read often, but moving, and somehow plausible. I hope you work out where to go next, and continue this soon; I'm interested to see where it goes. I'm also enjoying PiW, though, so...
You asked to be informed about Cedric's hair and eye colours: I'm pretty sure he does have brown hair, but I *think* his eyes are grey, rather than blue. I'm not sure where that comes from, canon-wise, but it seems to be the accepted wisdom.
Anyway, great work so far; keep writing fics! :)
-Scott

This is brilliant! please keep writing!

This sory is so amazing, I just keep reading it over and over again. I can't believe Harry's mum is there! Does that mean that all the other people Voldemort killed are there too? Because if they were, and i was Harry, I wouldn't want to leave.

This might sound strange, but I just keep imagining a Harry/Thanatos pairing. I don't know if it's just the way they act around each other, or if it's just my slightly-perverted mind, but I keep thinking that around the corner will be a fluffy moment! I do know that it's not the pairing here, or that there will be any pairing, but I can't help it! If you ever get the urge to write a Harry/Thanatos fic, I will love you even more! I still adore you though, since, as I said, this is an amazing fic. I look forward to updates!

OXOXOXOXOXOXO

~~IceChildOfNight

I'm not sure if there's much hope of you updating htis thing since it's been a caouple years, but please do.
This fic is so amazing and wonderful, I would hate to not be able to finish it.

Goddess and glory... this is absolutely, rapturously gorgeous. Thank you so much.

wow

Nice story!
I like it!
Update soon!

Please update this story is excellent!!

This is interestingly different to what I normally read. Very odd. I'm very interested in seeing what happens. Your descriptions are quite vivid, imaginative and fascinating.

I hope you keep up with this story!

wow. this is really really interesting. i can't wait to hear more from you about this story. it is well thought out and developed. keep up the good work!

You ever going to continue this? 'Cause, It's really good!

hey this is actaully a pretty good story. you need to update your stories more often!